Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, use correct grammar, and give one brief specific reason. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music to sad music. It lifts my mood and helps me concentrate when I’m working. For example, upbeat songs give me energy for exercising or doing chores.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and clearer explanation. Give a specific example of how it makes you feel and link the idea with a simple connector. Avoid repeating previous points.

Exemplo: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited because I enjoy lively atmospheres. For instance, when I hear upbeat pop at a party, I feel more energetic and want to dance.

Sugestão: Correct grammar (use 'haven't' or 'I haven't taken') and be concise. State directly whether you have taken classes, then add one brief reason or detail about your interest in listening rather than performing.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any music classes. I enjoy listening to music casually because I prefer relaxing with playlists rather than learning to sing or play an instrument.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use natural expressions: say what activities you do while listening, give one specific example, and correct plural/sentence structure errors. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks, especially household chores. For example, I play upbeat songs while cleaning or cooking because it makes the work more enjoyable.

× I prefer happy music rather than sad 'cause I like the vibe of happiness more than sadness.

✓ I prefer happy music to sad music because I like the feeling of happiness more than sadness.

Use of comparative preference: 'prefer A to B' is standard, not 'prefer A rather than B'. Also avoid colloquial contraction ' 'cause' in formal responses; use 'because'. Replace 'vibe' with 'feeling' for clearer register and repeat 'music' after 'sad' for parallel structure.

× Yes, the happy music make me more excited because I'm the kind of person who is surrounded by the hilarious people, so I like the happy music rather than sad music.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me more excited because I'm the kind of person who is surrounded by funny people, so I prefer happy music to sad music.

Subject-verb agreement: 'music' is a singular noun treated as singular, so use 'makes' not 'make'. 'The happy music' is unnecessary; use 'happy music'. 'Hilarious people' is odd in this context; 'funny people' is better. Use 'prefer A to B' for preference and avoid repetition.

× No, I have won't taken any music classes.

✓ No, I haven't taken any music classes.

Incorrect modal + perfect: 'have won't taken' is ungrammatical. Use the present perfect negative 'haven't taken' to indicate experience up to now.

× I like to listen music.

✓ I like to listen to music.

Verb + particle: 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Alternatively, use the gerund: 'I like listening to music.'

× It's not like I'm interested in singing or anything else.

✓ It's not that I'm interested in singing or anything else.

Use 'not that' to negate a state or preference. 'It's not like' is informal and can be vague; 'that' is clearer.

× I only enjoy or prefer to listen music.

✓ I only enjoy or prefer listening to music.

Combine verb + gerund and include the preposition 'to' after 'listen': 'listening to music.' Also choose either 'enjoy' or 'prefer' to avoid redundancy, e.g. 'I only enjoy listening to music.'

× Oh my God yes I listen to the music doing other courses especially when it's about the household things and all.

✓ Oh my God, yes, I listen to music while doing other chores, especially when I'm doing household tasks.

Adverbial phrase order and word choice: 'listen to music while doing other chores' is the proper structure. 'Doing other courses' is incorrect; use 'chores' or 'tasks'. 'Household things and all' is colloquial and vague; 'household tasks' is clearer.

× I love to listen music while doing my stuffs.

✓ I love to listen to music while doing my stuff.

'Listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Stuffs' is incorrect plural; use 'stuff' (uncountable) or 'things'/'tasks'. Place 'while' before the verb phrase 'doing my stuff' for clarity.