Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or example. Use one linking phrase to connect idea and keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. For example, upbeat pop songs make me feel energetic after a long day, so I often play them while I study or cook.

Sugestão: Answer directly and expand with a clear example and a linking word. Reduce hesitation and repetition; state how and why anime music affects you specifically.

Exemplo: Yes, happy music does make me more excited. For example, anime soundtracks often have fast rhythms and dramatic crescendos, which energize me and motivate me to exercise or work on creative projects.

Sugestão: Provide a concise, well-structured reply: state when you took classes, what you learned, and one brief detail. Avoid filler words and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I took music classes in junior high school. During those lessons I learned basic music theory and how to read sheet music, which helped me appreciate different genres of music.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific activities with a linking phrase. Remove hesitations and be precise about when and why you listen to music.

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things. For instance, I play podcasts or upbeat songs while I cook to make the chore more enjoyable, and I sometimes listen to calm music while I shower to relax.

× I prefer happy music because it is, because it is. It makes me happy and calm down.

✓ I prefer happy music because it makes me happy and calms me down.

The original has redundant phrase 'because it is, because it is' and incorrect verb form 'calm down' after subject 'it'. Use simple present 'makes' and subject + verb agreement 'calms me down' to describe habitual effects. Remove redundancy for clarity.

× Yes, I do. Uh, for example. Anime music is especially more exciting, more exciting me.

✓ Yes, it does. For example, anime music is especially exciting and excites me more.

The question asked whether music makes the student feel more excited, so respond with 'Yes, it does' not 'Yes, I do'. 'Exciting me' is incorrect word order and needs a finite verb: 'excites me'. Also avoid unnecessary repetition 'more exciting, more exciting me' and use 'especially exciting' and 'excites me more'.

× Yes, uh, in, in junior high school student. Uh-huh. Oh, in junior high school, Gen. in junior high school. I, I classes, uh, music classes.

✓ Yes, I took music classes in junior high school.

The original is fragmented and redundant. The correct simple past 'took' fits the question 'Have you taken any music classes?' and concise structure 'I took music classes in junior high school' clearly communicates the idea.

× Yes, I do. Uh, actually I, I, I listen to music while I I cooking and I go to bathroom.

✓ Yes, I do. Actually, I listen to music while I cook and when I go to the bathroom.

Use base form 'cook' after the auxiliary present 'do' for habitual actions. 'I I cooking' is incorrect; replace with 'I cook'. Also say 'go to the bathroom' with the article 'the' and use 'when' to connect activities. Maintain simple present for regular habits.