Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (tempo, upbeat) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music. For example, upbeat songs with a lively tempo lift my mood and help me stay positive, especially when I’m stressed or doing chores.

Sugestão: Provide a direct topic sentence then expand with a clear reason and a short example. Correct word choice and grammar (upbeat, energetic) and avoid unclear fragments.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely — upbeat music makes me feel more excited because of its lively rhythm and energetic melody. For instance, when I listen to energetic pop songs I feel motivated to exercise or dance.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear structure: state what lessons you took and for how long, then give one specific detail about your skills. Use correct phrases (been playing piano, reading music, composing) and avoid trailing incomplete clauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I’ve been playing the piano for 16 years, so I’m comfortable sight-reading music and performing simple classical pieces. I also write short compositions when I have free time.

Sugestão: Give a complete and coherent response: start with how often you do it, then give examples and a brief reason. Fix grammar (when I’m working out, when I’m running) and finish the sentence.

Exemplo: I sometimes listen to music when I’m working out — for example, I always listen to playlists while running because they keep me motivated. However, I rarely listen to music when I’m studying because I need concentration.

× I prefer happy music because listening happy music makes me happy.

✓ I prefer happy music because listening to happy music makes me happy.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. This is a fixed verb-preposition pattern (incorrect use of prepositions, type 11, but here the main fix is adding 'to' to form 'listening to'). Suggestion: use 'listen to' or use a clause like 'when I listen to happy music'. Note: keep 'listening to' + noun phrase.

× I want to be positive when I listen to a music so that's why I prefer happy bright temp up temp song.

✓ I want to be positive when I listen to music, so that's why I prefer happy, upbeat songs.

The phrase 'a music' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Also word order and word choice ('up tempo' should be 'upbeat' or 'up-tempo') and plural form 'songs' fits general preference. Suggestion: use 'music' without 'a' and use 'upbeat songs' for clarity; add comma before 'so' and separate adjectives correctly.

× Yes definitely it makes me feel more excited because happy music is usually up temp and bright vibes so it makes me expect except.

✓ Yes, definitely. It makes me feel more excited because happy music is usually upbeat and has bright vibes, so it raises my expectations.

Several problems: 'up temp' is incorrect colloquial form; use 'upbeat' or 'up-tempo'. 'Bright vibes' is acceptable but needs structure 'has bright vibes'. The clause 'so it makes me expect except' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'so it raises my expectations'. Also punctuation: add commas/periods. Suggestion: choose clear verbs like 'raises' and correct adjective forms.

× Yes, I've been running piano for 16 years, so I'm pretty good at playing piano and also I'm good at reading compos and also I've been learning.

✓ Yes, I've been playing the piano for 16 years, so I'm pretty good at it; I'm also good at reading music, and I have been learning composing.

'Running piano' is incorrect; the verb 'play' is used with instruments and needs 'the' before 'piano' (article). 'Playing piano' often requires 'the' in British English; 'playing the piano' is safest. 'Reading compos' should be 'reading music' (composition abbreviation wrong). The final clause 'I've been learning' is incomplete; specify object 'composing' or 'music theory'. Suggestion: use 'playing the piano', 'reading music', and complete verbs like 'learning composition'.

× I sometimes listen to music when I working out, like for example when I running I always listen to music, but in other situations I rarely listen to music because.

✓ I sometimes listen to music when I work out; for example, when I run I always listen to music, but in other situations I rarely do.

Use the base form after 'when' with present tense: 'when I work out' and 'when I run'. The clause ended with 'because.' leaving it incomplete; better to end 'rarely do' or complete the reason. Suggestion: use simple present 'work' and 'run' and avoid trailing 'because' without a clause.