Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I prefer happy music”) then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words, correct basic grammar (e.g. “when I listen to sad music” not “when I I listen sad music”).

Exemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me relax. For example, upbeat songs with a fast tempo make me feel more positive and energetic, so I usually choose them when I want to unwind.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct main sentence and then one supporting detail connected by a linking phrase (e.g. 'because' or 'so'). Reduce repetition and use varied vocabulary (e.g. 'cheerful', 'uplifting', 'boosts my mood').

Exemplo: Yes, cheerful music does make me feel more excited because its lively rhythm boosts my energy. For instance, listening to upbeat pop songs when I’m getting ready in the morning helps me start the day feeling motivated.

Sugestão: Answer directly then add one brief specific detail about how you learn music independently. Use correct tense and prepositions (e.g. 'listen to music' and 'on YouTube'). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any formal music classes. Instead, I learn songs and techniques by watching tutorials on YouTube and following musicians on social media.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence then one or two specific examples of activities during which you listen to music, using linking words like 'for example' or 'when'. Correct grammar (e.g. 'when I am working in the field' and 'it makes me feel relaxed').

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things. For example, when I am working in the field or doing household chores, I play relaxing songs because they make me feel more comfortable and help me concentrate.

× Yes, I prefer happy music because whenever I I listen sad music, I think I am in the person.

✓ Yes, I prefer happy music because whenever I listen to sad music, I feel like I am that person.

Errors: omitted preposition 'to' after 'listen' (preposition issue ID 11) and incorrect verb 'think I am in the person' meaning 'feel like I am that person' (sentence structure ID 26). However, per instructions only correct items matching the provided list; the main grammatical issue is third person singular form was not required here, but the verb 'listen' needs 'to' (preposition). Suggested correction fixes both the missing preposition and the awkward phrasing. Suggestion: use 'listen to' with music and use 'feel like' to express identification.

× That's why I, I used to listen happy music.

✓ That's why I used to listen to happy music.

The phrase 'listen to' requires the preposition 'to' (preposition issue ID 11) and 'used to' is correct for past habitual action. The original omitted 'to'. Suggestion: always use 'listen to' when followed by an object (music).

× It's uh, will help me to relax.

✓ It helps me to relax.

Using 'will' with 'it's' here is incorrect because the speaker refers to a general effect, not a future prediction. This is a tense/modal misuse (modal verb usage ID 4 and present tense ID 6). Correct to simple present 'helps' for habitual/general truth. Suggestion: use simple present for general facts: 'It helps me to relax.'

× Yes, happy music make me feel more excited because whenever I listen happy music.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because whenever I listen to happy music,

Subject 'happy music' is singular, so verb must be 'makes' not 'make' (third person singular issue ID 2). Also 'listen' requires preposition 'to' (preposition issue ID 11); corrected both. Suggestion: match verb to subject number and use 'listen to'.

× It helps to relax me and make me comfortable and make my mood also good.

✓ It helps me relax, makes me comfortable, and improves my mood.

Original is repetitive and has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Helps me relax' is correct instead of 'helps to relax me' (verb/pronoun order issue ID 12 and structure ID 26). Use parallel structure with verbs 'helps', 'makes', 'improves'. Suggestion: use concise parallel verbs and correct object placement: 'helps me relax'.

× No, I haven't taken any music classes.

✓ No, I haven't taken any music classes.

Sentence is grammatically correct; it uses present perfect appropriately to indicate no experience up to now. No change needed.

× I used to listen music from YouTube and other social media only and I haven't used any classes in my entire life.

✓ I used to listen to music on YouTube and other social media only, and I have never taken any classes in my life.

'listen to' requires preposition 'to' (preposition issue ID 11). Use preposition 'on' with platforms. 'I haven't used any classes' is incorrect; use 'taken any classes' (verb in past participle with have for experience; past participle issue ID 9). Also 'in my entire life' better as 'in my life'. Suggestion: use 'listen to' and 'have never taken' to describe past experience.

× Yes I do whenever I have been in working like in field and other working which is not related to study in the time I used to listen to music.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I am working in the field or doing other non-study-related work, I listen to music.

Original mixes tenses incorrectly: 'have been in working' is ungrammatical (present perfect continuous misuse ID 6 and sentence structure ID 26). 'Used to listen' implies a past habit; here the habit is current so use simple present 'listen'. Also 'in the field' and 'non-study-related work' are clearer. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct verb forms: 'I am working' or simply 'when I work'.

× It makes it feels comfortable and relaxes.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

'It makes it feels' is wrong: 'makes' should be followed by an object and bare infinitive or adjective: 'makes me feel' (pronoun error ID 12 and verb form ID 8). 'relaxes' as intransitive doesn't fit; use adjective 'relaxed'. Suggestion: use 'makes me feel' + adjective: 'comfortable and relaxed'.