Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences) and avoid repetitions. Focus on correct verb forms, prepositions and noun forms (e.g., "I prefer happy music"; "it lifts my mood"; "helps me forget stress").

Exemplo: I prefer happy music because upbeat songs lift my mood and make me feel energetic. For example, when I listen to lively pop, I find it easy to sing along and forget about stress. Therefore, cheerful music usually helps me feel more positive.

Sugestão: Give a direct yes/no answer followed by a clear reason and a specific example. Use correct collocations ("lift my mood", "give me energy") and avoid unclear phrases like "energized relics." Limit to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word such as "because" or "so".

Exemplo: Yes, happy music definitely lifts my mood and gives me energy. For example, when I feel tired while studying, I play upbeat tracks to boost my concentration and motivation.

Sugestão: Answer directly then provide specific supporting details about how you learned and your current level. Correct grammar ("learned from online videos", "practicing by myself", "my progress isn't satisfying", "intermediate"). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and use linking words like "but" or "however."

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any formal music classes, but I taught myself basic chords on an acoustic guitar by watching online videos. However, my progress has been slow and I'm still at an intermediate level, so I'm planning to take lessons soon.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples and a linking phrase. Improve grammar and collocations: "get into the zone", "on many occasions", "when I'm bored", "for my productivity". Keep it natural and concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities because it helps me get into the zone. For example, I play upbeat playlists when I exercise and calm instrumental music when I'm studying, which improves my focus and productivity.

× I lean toward to a happy music because the type of music influenced to my mood when I listening to an upbeat music is make me burst into the song easily and change my into energetic mode is help me forget about straight and worry.

✓ I lean toward happy music because the type of music influences my mood; listening to upbeat music makes me burst into song easily and changes me into an energetic mood, helping me forget stress and worry.

Multiple errors: 'lean toward to' should be 'lean toward' (incorrect preposition), 'a happy music' should be 'happy music' (article and singular/plural), 'influenced to my mood' should be 'influences my mood' (verb form and preposition), 'when I listening' requires gerund or progressive structure 'when I listen' or 'when I'm listening' (verb form), 'an upbeat music' should be 'upbeat music' (article), 'is make me' should be 'makes me' (subject-verb agreement and remove extra 'is'), 'burst into the song' -> 'burst into song' (idiomatic), 'change my into energetic mode' -> 'changes me into an energetic mood' (correct object and noun choice), 'is help me forget about straight and worry' -> 'helping me forget stress and worry' (use participle to link clauses and correct 'stress'). Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns, match verb forms (base, -ing, or -s) to tense and subject, and use correct prepositions or omit them when not needed.

× Of course, a big song always live up my mood and give me more energy.

✓ Of course, an upbeat song always lifts my mood and gives me more energy.

'a big song' is incorrect choice of adjective; 'upbeat' or 'energetic' fits context. 'live up my mood' is incorrect verb collocation; correct is 'lift my mood'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'song...lifts' and 'gives'. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjectives and ensure verbs agree with singular subjects.

× I often listen to happy music when I need motivation, like when I'm tired of studying the rhythm and energized relics make me reboot an energy to study more.

✓ I often listen to happy music when I need motivation, for example when I'm tired of studying; the rhythm and energetic beats help me regain energy to study more.

Original sentence has unclear nouns and awkward phrases: 'tired of studying the rhythm' and 'energized relics' are incorrect. 'reboot an energy' is unidiomatic. Correction uses clear structure and appropriate nouns: 'rhythm and energetic beats' and 'regain energy'. Suggestion: use clear subject-noun pairs and common collocations like 'regain energy' and 'energetic beats'.

× I've never taken any classes, but I have an acoustic guitar and learn some basic chords from all live videos.

✓ I've never taken any classes, but I have an acoustic guitar and learned some basic chords from live videos.

Mix of present perfect and simple past: 'learn' should be past 'learned' to match completed action from videos. 'all live videos' is incorrect; use 'live videos' or 'online videos'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for completed actions and remove unnecessary words.

× I've been practicing my by myself.

✓ I've been practicing by myself.

'practicing my' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive pronoun that needs a noun. Omit 'my' or use 'myself' correctly. Suggestion: use reflexive 'by myself' or 'on my own' when indicating doing something alone.

× The project is not satisfying. My skill is still intermediately real.

✓ The progress is not satisfying. My skill is still at an intermediate level.

'project' likely intended 'progress'. 'intermediately real' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'at an intermediate level' or 'intermediate'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'progress' and standard adjective noun phrases like 'intermediate level'.

× Absolutely, listening to music helps me into the zone when I'm reading or studying alone.

✓ Absolutely, listening to music helps me get into the zone when I'm reading or studying alone.

'helps me into the zone' is missing verb 'get' to form the idiom 'get into the zone'. Suggestion: use common expressions correctly, e.g., 'get into the zone'.

× I play music in many occasion also.

✓ I play music on many occasions as well.

'in many occasion' has wrong preposition and singular 'occasion'; correct is 'on many occasions'. Also 'also' better as 'as well' at the end. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'on' with 'occasions' and place adverbs appropriately.

× For example, I enjoy music while exercising or even when I'm boring.

✓ For example, I enjoy music while exercising or even when I'm bored.

'I'm boring' means I cause boredom; intended is 'I'm bored' (passive feeling). Suggestion: use correct adjective 'bored' to express feeling.

× It's like a part of my life to get into the music for my productivity.

✓ It's part of my life and helps my productivity.

Original phrasing is awkward: 'to get into the music for my productivity' is unclear. Simplify to 'It's part of my life and helps my productivity.' Suggestion: use concise, natural structures and link ideas with conjunctions.