Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a brief reason. Avoid addressing the examiner (ma'am) in your answer and keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No) and then give specific reasons using linking words (because, so, and). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because it refreshes my mind and improves my mood, so I feel more energetic and focused.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain briefly with a clear reason. Use correct verb forms and avoid unclear phrases like "do not have trust in music." If you wish, mention family influence as a supporting detail.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any music classes because I wasn't sure about learning formally, although my grandfather loves music and inspired me to listen more.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two specific supporting reasons. Use linking words (because, so) and correct grammar (subject–verb agreement). Avoid repeating general phrases like "and I like this."

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while working because it refreshes my mind and helps me concentrate, so I usually complete tasks more efficiently.

× Yeah, feel like music feel me better happy because it refresh your mind and it's good for hearing and our mind.

✓ Yeah, I feel like music makes me feel happier because it refreshes your mind and it's good for listening and for the mind.

Errors: missing subject 'I' and wrong verb forms. 'Feel like' needs a subject and 'music feel me' is incorrect subject-verb structure: subject 'music' requires third person singular verb 'makes' (third person singular issue, but listed under present tense here because verb forms are present). Use comparative 'happier' to compare states. 'Refresh' needs third person singular 'refreshes'. 'Hearing and our mind' is unclear; use 'listening' and 'the mind' or 'for the mind'. Suggestion: include explicit subject, use correct third-person singular present verbs, and use appropriate adjectives/adverb forms (happier).

× No, I do not take any music classic because I have do not have trust in music but my grandpa loves music.

✓ No, I did not take any classical music classes because I do not have trust in music, but my grandpa loves music.

Errors: tense and word choice. The question asked about past experience ('Have you taken...') so use past simple 'did not take' or present perfect 'have not taken'. Also 'music classic' is incorrect word order and form; use 'classical music classes'. 'I have do not have' is ungrammatical; use 'I do not have'. Suggestion: choose correct tense to match question, correct noun phrase order, and remove duplicated auxiliary verbs.

× Yes, I like the music while working because it will refresh my mind and makes works more efficient and good and I like this.

✓ Yes, I like listening to music while working because it refreshes my mind and makes my work more efficient; I like that.

Errors: verb forms and article/pronoun use. Use 'listening to music' not 'the music' for general activity. 'Will refresh' is future but general truth uses present 'refreshes'. 'Makes works' is incorrect plural and missing possessive; use 'makes my work' or 'makes my work more efficient'. 'Good' is vague; replace with clearer phrase 'I like that'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual/general statements, correct noun phrases and possessives, and simplify redundant phrases.