Teachers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep answers concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and unrelated questions. Use correct grammar and singular/plural forms and avoid asking the examiner questions back.

Exemplo: Yes. My favorite teacher was my primary school math teacher because he taught me easy methods to solve complex problems. For example, he showed me a simple formula for dividing fractions that made homework much faster.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and one or two concise reasons. Use correct articles and word forms (e.g., 'an engineer') and avoid filler phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas coherently.

Exemplo: No, I don't. I would prefer a medical career, such as a doctor or nurse, because I want to help people with their health. Teaching seems too demanding for me, requiring long hours and a lot of preparation.

Sugestão: Be specific and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Begin with a topic sentence, then give a clear detail (name, years, how he helped). Avoid mispronounced or incorrect words (e.g., 'math teacher' not 'matte T-shirt').

Exemplo: Yes, I remember my grade 8–10 math teacher, Deepnath Saur. He helped me improve my problem-solving skills by teaching step-by-step methods for algebra and geometry.

Sugestão: Give a short direct answer and one clear reason. Use correct tense and pronouns and avoid awkward phrasing. Link sentences with words like 'but' or 'so' to make the sequence clear.

Exemplo: No, I'm not in touch with them now. I used to contact them on Facebook, but my old account was deleted and I haven't reconnected with them on my new account.

Sugestão: Provide one clear, specific example of how the teacher helped. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Keep to two or three sentences and include linking words like 'for example' or 'by' to explain the method.

Exemplo: My favorite teacher improved my math skills by teaching shortcut techniques. For example, he taught me a formula for quickly simplifying algebraic expressions, which saved me a lot of time on tests.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason with correct grammar. Use comparative language correctly and avoid hesitation sounds. Keep it to two sentences: your preference and the reason.

Exemplo: I prefer my primary school teachers because they taught me for longer—around four to five years—so we developed a closer relationship, while high school teachers taught me for shorter periods.

× I have a favorite teacher who used to teach me in my primary schools level and he was a math teacher who had taught me a lot of mathematical problems and solutions and he is my favorite teacher.

✓ I have a favorite teacher who taught me at the primary school level; he was my math teacher and taught me many mathematical problems and solutions, so he is my favorite.

The original sentence is long and repetitive with tense inconsistency ('used to teach', 'was', 'had taught', 'is'). This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Simplify by using simple past for past facts ('taught') and present for the ongoing opinion ('is my favorite'), remove redundancy, and link clauses with proper punctuation or conjunctions. Suggestion: break long ideas into shorter clauses and keep tenses consistent.

× What is your math?

✓ What is your favorite subject in math?

The question 'What is your math?' is ungrammatical and vague; it is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Clarify the intention: ask about a favorite area or topic in mathematics or favorite subject. Use 'favorite subject in math' or 'Which area of math do you like?'.

× I don't think I want to be a teacher in the future because I want to be a something else like a doctor, a nurse or a engineer, but not a teacher because a teacher is a very tough job.

✓ I don't think I want to be a teacher in the future because I want to be something else, like a doctor, a nurse, or an engineer; I don't want to be a teacher because it is a very tough job.

Errors include article use ('a something else', 'a engineer') and sentence structure/tenseness. This fits future tense and article errors (IDs 7 and 22). Use 'something else' without an article, and 'an engineer' (vowel sound). Keep 'I don't think I want' for future intent and use 'it is' for general statements. Suggestions: avoid redundant phrases and use correct articles before vowel sounds.

× He has to he or she has to work or teach for a service.

✓ He or she has to work hard or provide a service as a teacher.

Original repeats and mixes pronouns and phrases, causing pronoun and sentence structure errors (IDs 12 and 26). Use a single clear pronoun phrase 'He or she' and a clearer verb phrase 'has to work hard' or 'provide a service'. Ensure parallel structure when listing actions.

× I still remember my matte T-shirt who used to teach me a math when I was grade 8-9 and ten.

✓ I still remember my math teacher who taught me when I was in grades 8, 9 and 10.

This sentence has incorrect word choice ('matte T-shirt' instead of 'math teacher') and article/grade expression issues—these are word choice and sentence structure problems (IDs 13 and 26). Use 'math teacher' and 'in grades 8, 9 and 10' or 'in grades 8 to 10'. Also use simple past 'taught' for past events.

× His name is Deepnath Saur and he really helped me to improve my mathematical problem.

✓ His name is Deepnath Saur and he really helped me improve my mathematical problem-solving skills.

Original has awkward infinitive use and incorrect noun phrase 'mathematical problem'—this is a pronoun/word choice and sentence structure issue (IDs 12 and 26). Use 'helped me improve' (no 'to' needed after 'help' in this structure) and the correct noun 'problem-solving skills'.

× I used to talk to them in Facebook but now my old ID has been deleted.

✓ I used to talk to them on Facebook, but now my old account has been deleted.

Preposition and word choice errors: use 'on Facebook' not 'in Facebook', and 'account' or 'ID' clearer as 'account'. Also present perfect passive 'has been deleted' is acceptable; this is mainly preposition and word choice error (ID 11 and 22). Suggestion: use 'on' with platform names and 'account' for clarity.

× I'm using my new ID and there he's not friend in my new ID so I don't have any connection with him right now.

✓ I'm using my new account, and he is not on my friends list, so I don't have any connection with him right now.

Original mixes pronouns and incorrect phrasing ('there he's not friend in my new ID')—pronoun and sentence structure errors (IDs 12 and 26). Use clear subjects and correct phrases: 'on my friends list' and 'account'. Keep clauses connected logically.

× It's my favorite teacher was a math T-shirt.

✓ My favorite teacher was a math teacher.

This sentence is ungrammatical—'It's my favorite teacher was' mixes constructions; also 'T-shirt' is incorrect for 'teacher'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use a simple past statement: 'My favorite teacher was a math teacher.'

× He helped. He had helped my to boost up my skills in mathematics and and and he had really helped me to solve a mathematical problem in a very short and convenient way by helping to gives me a formula.

✓ He helped me boost my mathematics skills, and he really helped me solve mathematical problems quickly and easily by giving me formulas.

Multiple issues: inappropriate past perfect 'had helped' when simple past 'helped' is needed, incorrect pronoun 'my', repetition, wordiness, and wrong verb forms 'gives'. This falls under past tense issue and verb form errors (IDs 5, 9, 26). Use simple past for past actions, correct object pronoun 'me', and correct verb forms 'giving' or 'by giving me formulas'. Keep sentences concise.

× I like my both primary and high school teachers, but uh, usually high school teachers has taught me only for two years, whereas my school teacher has taught me about for four to five years.

✓ I like both my primary and high school teachers, but usually high school teachers taught me for only two years, whereas my primary school teachers taught me for about four to five years.

Errors include word order ('my both'), subject-verb agreement ('teachers has taught' should be 'teachers taught'), tense consistency, and missing 'primary' before 'school teacher'. These are subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issues (IDs 27 and 26). Use 'both my', ensure plural subjects match plural verbs ('teachers taught'), and maintain consistent past tense when referring to past teaching durations.

× So I prefer.

✓ So I prefer my primary school teachers.

The original is an incomplete sentence lacking an object—this is a sentence structure error (ID 26 and 23). Specify what is preferred to make the sentence complete. Suggestion: always include the object of 'prefer' (prefer what or whom).