Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation sounds (uh), correct grammar (e.g. 'a person who likes to be well managed' -> 'a person who likes things to be well organized'), and give one specific supporting example. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' appropriately.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I prefer to keep my things tidy because I concentrate better in a clean environment. For example, I always clear and organize my desk every night so I can start fresh the next morning.

Sugestão: Provide a direct topic sentence, reduce repetition and hesitations, and improve grammar (e.g. 'I used to keep my room tidy' and 'my mother was strict and insisted I clean it'). Add a brief specific detail or comparison about childhood habit and avoid overlong pauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy as a child. I couldn't play in a messy room, so I always made my bed and put toys away. My mother was strict and insisted that I cleaned my room before going out to play.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear routine, correct verb forms ('love being disciplined', 'I help colleagues'), and finish the final sentence. Use linking words like 'also' and give one concrete action (e.g. labeling, files, cleaning at end of day). Avoid ending sentences incomplete.

Exemplo: I keep my work and study space tidy by following a simple routine. I tidy my desk and file papers at the end of each day, and I also remind colleagues to clear their desks before leaving. At home, I use boxes and folders to organize materials so everything has a place.

Sugestão: Give a concise opinion statement, correct noun/adjective use ('being tidy' not 'being a tidy'), avoid filler words, and support your view with one or two specific reasons linked logically. Finish your thought clearly without trailing off.

Exemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary. It helps people stay productive and focused because you can find things quickly and avoid wasting time. For instance, organized notes and files make studying or working much faster and less stressful.

× I'm person who loves to well managed and well organized because, uh, since my childhood I find, uh, hard to work in a dirty place.

✓ I'm a person who likes to be well managed and well organized because, since my childhood, I have found it hard to work in a dirty place.

Missing article before 'person' and incorrect verb forms. Use 'a person' (article error). Use 'likes' to match habitual preference and 'to be well managed and well organized' to form the correct infinitive passive/adjective structure. 'Since my childhood I have found' uses present perfect to show a condition that started in the past and continues to now. Also add commas for clarity.

× I always clean my desk before going to the bed.

✓ I always clean my desk before going to bed.

Do not use the definite article with the phrase 'going to bed' in this habitual context. 'Going to bed' is an idiomatic expression and should not include 'the'.

× Without any doubt, since my childhood, I used to keep my room, uh, tidy as I clean it, uh, uh, perfectly uh, uh, I can't play in messy, uh, room.

✓ Without any doubt, since my childhood, I used to keep my room tidy because I cleaned it perfectly; I couldn't play in a messy room.

Mix of tenses and modal errors. 'Used to' indicates past habitual actions; follow with past tense 'cleaned' and 'couldn't' (past ability/permission). Remove extraneous filler words. Also add the article 'a' before 'messy room' and use punctuation to separate ideas.

× So my, my mother was quite strict, uh, when I was uh, young and she always ordered me to clean my room before.

✓ So my mother was quite strict when I was young, and she always told me to clean my room beforehand.

Redundant fillers removed. 'Ordered me to' is acceptable but 'told me to' is more natural here. 'Before' alone is vague; 'beforehand' or 'before I went out/bed' is clearer. Removed duplicate 'my' and unnecessary commas.

× I always love to being disciplined about cleaning my room or my workplace.

✓ I always like being disciplined about cleaning my room or my workplace.

Incorrect infinitive form 'love to being'. Use 'like being' or 'love being' (verb + -ing). 'Like/love to be disciplined' is also possible but 'like being disciplined' is natural. 'Always' with 'like' conveys habitual preference.

× I always assist my colleagues to clean the workplace and their own desk before leaving for home.

✓ I always help my colleagues clean the workplace and their own desks before leaving for home.

'Assist ... to clean' is awkward; use 'help ... clean' or 'assist them in cleaning'. 'Desk' should be plural 'desks' to match 'colleagues'. This fixes pronoun/reference and noun number agreement.

× However, in my study, when, uh, whenever I'm in my home for studies, I always organize my.

✓ However, when I study at home, I always organize my study area.

Sentence is incomplete ('organize my.'), has redundant words, and awkward word order. Simplify to 'when I study at home' and complete the object 'study area' to make a full sentence.

× Without any doubt, yes umm being a tidy is very crucial because it helps people to stay productive as well as focus because we can find things very quickly if they are organized.

✓ Without any doubt, yes. Being tidy is very important because it helps people stay productive and focused, and we can find things very quickly if they are organized.

'Being a tidy' is incorrect: 'tidy' is an adjective, not a noun, so use 'being tidy'. 'Very crucial' is redundant; 'important' is more natural. 'Helps people to stay productive as well as focus' should be 'helps people stay productive and focused'. Simplify conjunctions for clarity.

× Without it, it is a very messy and it's hard to find a *.

✓ Without it, things become very messy and it's hard to find anything.

Original has 'it is a very messy' which is ungrammatical (what is 'it'?) and ends with an asterisk placeholder. Replace with 'things become very messy' and 'anything' to express inability to find items. This fixes sentence structure and meaning.