Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (use 'Yes, I do' and 'everything' not 'every single things'), and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add a brief specific detail to support your statement using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I like to keep my home tidy, and I organize everything from dishes to clothes. For example, I always put washed dishes away immediately so the kitchen stays clean.

Sugestão: Be direct and correct common errors. Use a concise topic sentence, correct vocabulary ('toys' not 'stops'), remove repetition, and use a linking word to explain reason. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mother taught me from a young age to organize my toys and clothes, so I’ve kept that habit into adulthood.

Sugestão: Clarify vocabulary and structure. Use a clear topic sentence describing your method, correct word choice ('schedule' and 'tasks' not 'taxes'), use linking words (for example, then, so) and give a specific example of prioritization. Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds.

Exemplo: I use a schedule and a to-do list to keep my study space organized. I list tasks for each week and then prioritize them from most to least important, so I always know what to do next.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion in one sentence, then support with a specific reason using linking words. Correct grammar ('tidy' not 'tide') and reduce hesitation. Keep answers concise and use concrete examples of benefits.

Exemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it creates a clean environment for everyone. For example, in a family household, tidiness makes it easy to find things and reduces stress for all members.

× Yes, I am.

✓ Yes, I do.

The question 'Do you like to keep things tidy?' uses the auxiliary do; the appropriate short answer uses 'do' not 'am'. 'Yes, I am' is used for 'Are you...' Construction mismatch; reply should mirror the auxiliary verb of the question.

× All the stuff in my home is tidied by me.

✓ I tidy all the stuff in my home.

The original uses a passive construction awkwardly and unnecessary. Active voice ('I tidy') is clearer and more natural for describing habitual actions. Also 'all the stuff' is informal but acceptable; keep active verb for habit.

× It's organized by me.

✓ I organize it.

Similar to previous: passive form is unnatural for describing regular habits. Use active present simple 'I organize it.' for routines.

× Every single things from dishes to, umm, clothes.

✓ Every single thing, from dishes to clothes.

'Every' requires a singular noun: 'every single thing' not 'things'. Also remove extraneous comma and filler words. This correction matches grammatical number agreement.

× My mother taught me from from the very, very beginning age to organize my stops and my clothes.

✓ My mother taught me from a very early age to organize my books and my clothes.

Use simple past 'taught' is fine; issues: repeated 'from', unnatural phrase 'beginning age' should be 'a very early age'. 'stops' seems to be a mispronunciation—likely 'books' or 'stuff'; corrected to 'books'. This keeps past-tense and clarifies meaning.

× So I think I still keep that habits from the time I was a child.

✓ So I think I still keep that habit from the time I was a child.

Use singular 'habit' to match 'that'; 'keep that habit' is acceptable. The tense 'still keep' (present simple) is fine to express ongoing habit. Also 'from the time I was a child' is correct to indicate origin.

× Umm, for me, I would use the, uh, S schedule calendar.

✓ For me, I use a schedule or calendar.

Unnecessary articles and filler words create confusion. 'the S schedule calendar' is incorrect. Use 'a schedule' or 'a calendar' to talk generally about the tool you use. Also prefer simple present 'I use' for habitual action rather than 'I would use' which can sound conditional.

× So I put all these taxes from weeks to weeks and categorize them from the prioritizing from the highest to the lowest those so I can see what's it's important you need to be done right now.

✓ So I list all my tasks week by week and categorize them by priority from highest to lowest so I can see what needs to be done right now.

Many errors: 'taxes' should be 'tasks'; 'from weeks to weeks' -> 'week by week'; 'categorize them from the prioritizing' -> 'categorize them by priority'; 'what's it's important you need to be done' -> 'what needs to be done'. This correction fixes vocabulary, prepositions ('by priority'), word order, and uses present simple for routines.

× Of course it is necessary to be tidy not for yourself, but for others.

✓ Of course it is necessary to be tidy not only for yourself but also for others.

Include 'only' and 'also' for the correlative conjunction pair 'not only... but also' to make sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× If you live not alone in a family, the tide is, is, umm, a good habit to develop a clean environment and, uh, you can pick up things easily.

✓ If you do not live alone, being tidy is a good habit because it helps keep the environment clean and makes it easier to pick things up.

Multiple issues: word order 'live not alone in a family' is unnatural; use 'do not live alone'. 'the tide' is incorrect word; should be 'being tidy' (gerund). Rephrase to explain benefits. This correction fixes verb placement, noun choice, and improves clarity.