Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid filler sounds. Add a brief reason and a specific routine with correct plural/singular forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I like to keep things tidy, especially my bedroom, because clutter makes me feel stressed. I usually spend about ten to twelve minutes each day straightening up clothes and putting items back in their place, which helps me stay focused.

Sugestão: Use correct past-tense forms and clear phrasing. Begin with a direct topic sentence about past habits, then give specific details and one linking phrase (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Avoid unclear expressions like 'double off the habit.'

Exemplo: No, I didn't. When I was a child I often made a mess because I had many toys and Lego pieces, so I rarely tidied up. My mother usually cleaned my room for me, so I never developed the habit of putting toys away.

Sugestão: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Specify exact actions you take and use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Correct collocations (e.g., 'clear my head', 'put things away') and remove awkward phrases like 'I'm easily my mood off.'

Exemplo: After I finish studying, I usually spend five to ten minutes tidying my desk by putting books and stationery away and wiping the surface. This routine helps clear my head and keeps me calm while working.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then explain with clear reasoning and examples. Use correct sentence structure and pronouns. Avoid fragmentary phrasing like 'although should be tidy.' Use linking words such as 'however' or 'on the other hand.'

Exemplo: I think it depends on age. Adults should be tidy and responsible for keeping their homes clean because they have work and family responsibilities, but it is normal for young children to be messy as they are still learning how to organize their things.

× Yes actually I'm trying to keeping things tidy, especially my bedrooms because I hate to see anything untidy or being a mess.

✓ Yes, actually I'm trying to keep things tidy, especially my bedroom because I hate to see anything untidy or messy.

Use the base form after 'trying to' (verb + to + base), not 'keeping'. Also 'bedrooms' should be singular 'bedroom' if referring to the student's room; 'being a mess' is awkward — 'messy' is the correct adjective. Suggestion: use 'trying to keep' and 'messy' for natural phrasing.

× Umm I try to spend about 10 or 12 minute a day to clean.

✓ Umm I try to spend about 10 or 12 minutes a day cleaning.

Use the plural 'minutes' for quantities greater than one. Also use the gerund 'cleaning' after 'spend' (spend time doing something). Suggestion: 'spend about 10 or 12 minutes a day cleaning.'

× When I was a child I usually make a mess because I had a lot of toys and legos so I rarely tidy up.

✓ When I was a child I usually made a mess because I had a lot of toys and Legos so I rarely tidied up.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so use past tense 'made' and 'tidied'. 'Legos' is a brand name usually capitalized as 'Legos'. Also 'rarely tidy up' should be past 'rarely tidied up.' Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for childhood habits.

× My mother would often clean my room for me so I'm never really double off the habit of putting my toys away.

✓ My mother would often clean my room for me, so I never really broke the habit of putting my toys away.

The clause describes a past result: use 'never really broke the habit' (past simple) rather than 'I'm never really double off the habit', which is ungrammatical. 'Double off' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'broke the habit' or 'didn't develop the habit.'

× For me after I finish I usually spend about 5 or 10 minutes to clean up my study space or my bathrooms because it just help me clear my head and I'm easily my mood off if I see anything like tidy or clean.

✓ For me, after I finish I usually spend about 5 or 10 minutes cleaning my study space or bathroom because it helps me clear my head and my mood is easily affected if I see anything untidy.

After 'spend' use gerund 'cleaning' not 'to clean up'. 'Bathrooms' should be singular if referring to one; keep consistent. 'help' requires third person singular 'helps'. The phrase 'I'm easily my mood off' is ungrammatical; use 'my mood is easily affected' or 'it easily puts me in a bad mood'. 'Tidy or clean' is awkward; use 'untidy.' Suggestion: restructure to 'spend 5 or 10 minutes cleaning... because it helps me clear my head and my mood is easily affected by untidiness.'

× For me it depends on age, although should be tidy and responsible for keeping their home clean because they often have work and family duties while it is normal for young children to be messy as they are still learning.

✓ For me, it depends on age: adults should be tidy and responsible for keeping their homes clean because they often have work and family duties, while it is normal for young children to be messy as they are still learning.

Sentence had missing subject for 'should be tidy' and inconsistent references. Add 'adults' as subject and use 'homes' plural to match 'adults'. Use a colon or comma to separate clauses and ensure parallel structure. Suggestion: explicitly state 'adults should' and use parallel phrasing for clarity.