Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), use correct grammar (e.g., present simple: 'I clean my room'), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific example to support your statement.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy keeping things tidy. I clean my room every weekend and wipe down surfaces whenever I see dust. For example, I make my bed every morning and put books back on the shelf to keep my space organized.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, past-focused topic sentence and one concrete childhood example. Remove repetition and correct grammar (e.g., 'I used to keep my room tidy'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. My mother taught me to clean every evening, so I would put toys away and sweep the floor before bed.

Sugestão: Answer directly: describe specific actions and routines. Use correct adverbs ('often' not 'oftenly'), avoid hesitations, and complete your sentences. Mention 2–3 concrete habits and use linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: I keep my study space tidy by clearing my desk after each study session and putting stationery in a drawer. At work, we follow cleaning guidelines, so I wipe counters regularly and restock supplies for customers.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and then a brief reason with a short example. Avoid repetition and correct word choice ('tidiness' not 'tightness'). Use linking words like 'however' to show contrast.

Exemplo: Yes, I think tidiness is important because it reduces stress and helps you find things quickly. However, some people are too busy to clean every day, so they tidy once a week instead.

× Whenever I'm home, I just, and I'm free and I just, uh, cleaning my rooms and just cleaning the, every dirty thing at my home.

✓ Whenever I'm home and free, I just clean my rooms and clean every dirty thing in my home.

The original uses 'cleaning' after auxiliary 'do' omitted and awkward fragments. With present simple habit use base verb 'clean'. Remove filler words and use proper preposition 'in' for location.

× I don't like messy or The Dirty things.

✓ I don't like messy or dirty things.

Capitalization of 'Dirty' is incorrect and the article 'The' is unnecessary. Use lowercase 'dirty' as an adjective and omit the article.

× I'm a kind of hygienic person, so I love to keep the things tidy.

✓ I'm a hygienic person, so I love to keep things tidy.

'A kind of hygienic person' is awkward; use 'a hygienic person'. Omit 'the' before 'things' when speaking generally.

× Yes I remember from my childhood till till now I am kind of I am kind of hygienic person.

✓ Yes, I remember from my childhood until now I have been a hygienic person.

Use present perfect 'have been' to indicate a state from past until now. Remove repetition and use correct article 'a' with 'hygienic person'.

× I just hate the hate the dirt.

✓ I just hate dirt.

Phrase repeats 'hate' and uses unnecessary article 'the'. Use simple noun 'dirt' for general dislike.

× I hate messy rooms.

✓ I hate messy rooms.

This sentence is correct as written; no grammatical correction needed.

× So from from when I was a child my mom always taught me to keep the my surroundings clean for a good hygienic.

✓ Ever since I was a child, my mom always taught me to keep my surroundings clean for good hygiene.

Remove duplicate 'from', use 'ever since' or 'since', remove extra 'the' before 'my surroundings', and use the noun 'hygiene' instead of adjective 'hygienic' after 'good'.

× I oftenly clean my workplace and my study space clean all the time.

✓ I often clean my workplace and study space; they are clean all the time.

'Oftenly' is not a word; use 'often'. Avoid repeating 'clean'—use a clause to state they remain clean.

× So at work we do have the the crew guidelines, the employee guidelines that definitely we have to follow to clean the things for the customers.

✓ At work we have crew and employee guidelines that we must follow to keep things clean for the customers.

Remove unnecessary 'do' and duplicate 'the', simplify wording and use modal 'must' for obligation. Use 'keep things clean' instead of 'clean the things'.

× Umm and for the at my home, the study space is just always clean. I just put a.

✓ At my home, my study space is always clean.

Remove extra filler words 'Umm and for the at', correct word order, and omit incomplete fragment 'I just put a.' which is not a complete sentence.

× Yes, of course it is a necessary to to be clean, to be tidy.

✓ Yes, of course it is necessary to be clean and tidy.

Do not use 'a' before 'necessary' when it functions as an adjective in this structure. Remove duplicate 'to' and combine phrases with 'and'.

× But it totally depends upon a person and the schedule because some people are so busy so they do not have enough time to clean the things up.

✓ But it totally depends on the person and their schedule because some people are so busy that they do not have enough time to clean up.

Use 'depends on' not 'depends upon' (both possible but 'depends on' more natural here), use 'the person'--> 'the person' or 'a person' then 'their schedule' for gender neutrality, add 'that' to introduce result clause, and place 'up' after 'clean'.

× But but yeah, for me tightness is my first priority to be good.

✓ But yes, for me tidiness is my first priority.

Replace 'tightness' (wrong word) with 'tidiness'. Remove duplicate 'but' and the unnecessary phrase 'to be good'. Keep sentence concise.