Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and simplify your response. Start with a direct topic sentence saying whether you like to keep things tidy. Avoid incorrect medical references (e.g. “OCD syndrome”) and unclear fragments. Use one or two supporting reasons with linking words (because/so) and keep it under five sentences. Focus on correct grammar (I like being tidy; it’s part of my daily routine) and clear vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I do like to keep things tidy. It’s part of my daily routine because a clean environment helps me concentrate and feel calm. For example, I always clear my desk at the end of the day so I can start fresh the next morning.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use past tense for past habits (I used to...). Give a short reason or a brief example. Correct sentence structure and avoid unclear phrases like “tidy Ness” or “proof that I can't.” Use linking words such as “so” or “therefore” if you add a consequence.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. I always put my toys and clothes in their places, so my parents rarely had to tidy up for me. This habit probably explains why I stay organized now.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence describing the main method, then add one or two specific actions with proper linking words. Use correct verb forms (I ensure my things are always in the right place; I arrange my books on shelves) and avoid sentence fragments.

Exemplo: I keep my study space tidy by putting items back in their places after use. For instance, I always file paperwork in folders and arrange my books on the shelf, so my desk stays clear and organized.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion (Yes or No) and give a concise reason using correct grammar. Use linking words (because/therefore) and provide a specific benefit or short example. Avoid repeating words and incorrect verb forms (it can help, things are in the right place).

Exemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it helps you find things quickly and reduces stress. For example, when my study materials are organized, I waste less time looking for notes and can work more efficiently.

× Of course being tidy is like my daily use so I think I'm going to OCD syndrome because I can't see. The Mass.

✓ Of course. Being tidy is part of my daily routine, so I think I have obsessive-compulsive tendencies because I can't stand a mess.

The original sentence misuses adjectives and nouns ('daily use', 'OCD syndrome', 'The Mass') and contains awkward phrasing. Use 'daily routine' (noun) instead of 'daily use'. Say 'I have obsessive-compulsive tendencies' or 'I have OCD' rather than 'I'm going to OCD syndrome'. 'I can't stand a mess' is the correct idiomatic expression. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× Kids when I was a child I always keep my things tidy Ness and never put my things randomly so I think it's the proof that I can't.

✓ When I was a child I always kept my things tidy and never left them lying around, so I think that proves I still can't stand a mess.

Problems: unnecessary 'Kids', wrong verb tense ('keep' should be past 'kept'), incorrect noun form 'tidy Ness' should be 'tidiness' or adjective 'tidy', and awkward ending 'I can't.' Use plural/singular correctly and consistent tense. 'Left them lying around' is a natural way to say 'put my things randomly'.

× I ensure my things always put in the right place and. Arrange my book on the shelves so I keep always.

✓ I make sure my things are always put in the right place and arrange my books on the shelves, so I always keep my workspace tidy.

Original misuses include missing auxiliary verbs and wrong word order. Use 'make sure' instead of 'ensure' for natural spoken English, passive construction 'are put' for state, plural 'books', and correct adverb placement 'always' before main verb. Combine fragments into a single clear sentence.

× Yeah, of course it is necessary for our life because being tidy it can helps you to organize things so they are can put on the right place and tidy.

✓ Yes, of course it is necessary in life because being tidy can help you organize things so they can be put in the right place.

Errors: unnecessary pronoun 'it' after 'being tidy', incorrect modal + verb 'can helps' (should be 'can help'), wrong passive and word order 'they are can put', and wrong preposition 'on the right place' should be 'in the right place'. Use consistent pronouns and correct verb forms.