Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak in complete sentences, correct basic grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement), and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because/so/and). Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my family often spent weekends there. For example, I used to ride my bike along the paths and have picnics with my parents. Those visits helped me enjoy being outdoors and stay active.

Sugestão: Use consistent tense and complete clauses. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No/It depends), then explain with a reason and a simple example. Use linking words such as however, but, or although to connect ideas. Avoid trailing off and finish your thought.

Exemplo: It depends — I don't go to parks as often now because I work long hours. However, if I have free time I like to walk in a nearby park with my mother to relax and get some fresh air.

Sugestão: Ensure your answer matches the question—avoid contradictory or unclear responses. If you mean you would or would not like more parks, state it clearly and give reasons. Use accurate vocabulary (city center, urban area) and correct articles. Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences with linking words like because and so.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the city center has few green spaces. For example, many people travel to Lumpini Park to exercise, which shows there is a demand for more parks nearby.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the park and a specific reason. Use correct adjectives and collocations (popular, healthy activities, aerobic classes). Add one concrete detail about what you would do there. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Lumpini Park because it is very popular and offers aerobic classes. I plan to join an outdoor fitness class there to improve my health and meet other people who exercise regularly.

× When I was young, I. Go to park a lot and I can remember that I spend my time with my family a lot at the park and when I was young I love to ride a bike at park and.

✓ When I was young, I went to the park a lot. I remember spending a lot of time with my family at the park, and when I was young I loved riding my bike there.

This sentence has multiple structural and tense errors (Grammar problem type ID 26 and 5). The speaker mixes present and past tenses incorrectly and omits necessary articles and verb forms. Use simple past for habitual actions in the past (went, loved, spent). Add the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to a specific place. Use '-ing' form after 'remember' for activities (remember spending). Break into shorter sentences for clarity.

× To be honest, when I work a lot I didn't go to park, maybe because I'm a working woman, but if I have a chance go to walk around the park with my mom after I've.

✓ To be honest, when I worked a lot I didn't go to the park, maybe because I'm a working woman. But if I have a chance, I go for a walk around the park with my mom afterwards.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and lacks articles (Grammar problem type ID 5). Use past tense 'worked' to match 'didn't go'. Include the definite article 'the' before 'park'. Correct the infinitive phrase to 'go for a walk' and add 'afterwards' to complete the idea. Alternatively, use present perfect for recent habits, but keep tense consistent.

× But now fortunately they have a train to go to at Sualum Pini Park in Thai.

✓ Fortunately now they have a train that goes to Suan Lumpreni Park in Thailand.

Preposition and word choices are incorrect (Grammar problem type ID 11). Use 'that goes to' for the train's destination and correct the park name and country name forms. Remove unnecessary prepositions 'to go to at' and place modifiers in correct order.

× The the most of people who love exercise go over there and like create the content.

✓ Most people who like to exercise go there and create content.

There are issues with articles and pluralization (Grammar problem type ID 1 and 22). Remove the repeated 'the' and use 'Most people' rather than 'The most of people'. Use 'like to exercise' or 'like exercising' and correct verb form 'create' to match plural subject. Also remove 'go over there' to simpler 'go there.'

× Definitely, yes. I prefer Lumpini Park because now it's very almost popular in Thailand and they have a aerobic class that we can exercise and healthier.

✓ Definitely. I prefer Lumpini Park because it is now very popular in Thailand, and they have aerobic classes where we can exercise and be healthier.

This sentence mixes awkward adverbs and has incorrect verb forms (Grammar problem type ID 6 and 13). 'Very almost popular' is incorrect — use 'very popular' or 'almost popular' depending on meaning. 'They have a aerobic class' needs plural 'aerobic classes' and use 'where' to introduce purpose. Add 'be' before 'healthier' to form correct comparative structure.