Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "really" used multiple times) and correct verb forms (use past tense: "liked").

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. For example, I used to visit a neighbourhood park with my mother almost every day, where I would swing and play football with my friends. Those visits were special because they helped me make close childhood friendships.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and article use, and avoid redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail or reason using a linking word (e.g., "because"). Mention concrete examples (names or features) if possible.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Since I moved to Canada, I especially like parks with mountain views because they offer peaceful scenery and hiking trails, such as local lakeside parks where I can relax or take photos.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve grammar (plural/singular, articles). Give a concise opinion and one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., "because"). Keep answers within 2–4 sentences to be natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide free recreational space. For instance, additional small parks in residential areas would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors and reduce stress.

Sugestão: Be specific and accurate: name real parks if possible and correct vocabulary (e.g., "Maligne Lake" not "marine Lake", avoid "damp area"). Use one clear example and explain why you want to visit using linking words. Reduce hesitations and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit several parks in the future, especially in Banff National Park. For example, I hope to see Maligne Lake because I have heard its turquoise water and surrounding peaks are stunning and perfect for hiking and photography.

× When I was a child, I really like to go to the parks as I can really remember.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked to go to the parks as far as I can remember.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the main verb should be in the past tense ('liked') rather than present ('like'). Also, 'as I can really remember' is awkward; use 'as far as I can remember' to express memory. Suggestion: use past tense consistency and the fixed expression 'as far as I can remember'.

× I used to go to a park daily with my mom and there I used to take some swings and play around with friends.

✓ I used to go to a park daily with my mom and there I would swing and play with friends.

'Used to' is correct to describe habitual past actions; however, 'used to take some swings' is unnatural. Use 'would swing' or 'swing' to describe repeated past actions. 'Play around with friends' can be simplified to 'play with friends'. Maintain past habitual phrasing for clarity.

× I wish I could get that moment back.

✓ I wish I could have that moment back.

Wishing to change a past situation typically uses 'could have' or 'had' to indicate desire about the past. 'Could get' is not idiomatic here. Use 'could have that moment back' to express regret about a past time.

× Yes, definitely going to a parks is my one of the favorite thing as when I came to Canada I came to knew that there are a lot of parks which have mountains surrounding them.

✓ Yes, definitely going to parks is one of my favorite things because when I came to Canada I learned that there are a lot of parks surrounded by mountains.

Multiple errors: 'going to a parks' mixes singular article with plural noun—remove 'a' and use plural 'parks'. 'My one of the favorite thing' should be 'one of my favorite things' (word order and plural noun). 'Came to knew' is incorrect verb form; use 'learned' or 'found out' for past knowledge acquisition. Use past tense 'came' and 'learned' consistently. Also prefer 'surrounded by mountains' to 'which have mountains surrounding them'.

× So I like to visit those parks and see the view of nature lakes parks here in Canada.

✓ So I like to visit those parks and see the views of natural lakes and parks here in Canada.

The phrase 'view of nature lakes parks' is ungrammatical. Use 'views of natural lakes and parks' or 'the natural scenery, lakes, and parks'. 'Natural' is the correct adjective for 'lakes'. Ensure plural agreement 'views' fits multiple sights.

× Yes, definitely I would like to see as many as parks present in the city and even if government add some more park parks, it would be really nice to do as it is really nice to go and have your free time there.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to see as many parks as are present in the city, and even if the government adds some more parks, it would be really nice because it is great to spend free time there.

Several article and grammar problems: 'as many as parks present' has word-order issues; correct pattern is 'as many parks as are present'. 'Government' needs the definite article 'the government'. 'Add' should be 'adds' to agree with singular subject 'the government' (third person singular). 'Park parks' is duplication—use 'parks'. 'Have your free time there' is awkward; use 'spend free time there'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.

× You can feel stress free and it's just spending a good quality time with your friends and your family.

✓ You can feel stress-free and just spend quality time with your friends and family.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'it's just spending' incorrectly uses a dummy subject 'it' with a gerund; better to use the imperative construction 'just spend' or the infinitive. 'Stress free' should be hyphenated 'stress-free' as a compound adjective. 'A good quality time' is unnatural; 'quality time' is the correct expression. Remove redundant 'your' before 'family' if context already indicates belonging.

× Yes, there are definitely many parks which I would like to go to in future.

✓ Yes, there are definitely many parks that I would like to go to in the future.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'future' when referring to a specific time period: 'in the future'. Also 'which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural in restrictive clauses here.

× Like I have heard there are many beautiful parks in Banff as like a marine Lake Park and I don't know as much as which are present there.

✓ For example, I have heard there are many beautiful parks in Banff, such as a marine lake park, but I don't know exactly which ones are there.

Preposition and phrase errors: 'as like' is redundant—use 'such as' or 'like'. 'Marine Lake Park' capitalization is unclear; use 'a marine lake park' unless it's a proper name. 'I don't know as much as which are present there' is ungrammatical; say 'I don't know exactly which ones are there'. Use plural pronoun 'ones' to refer to parks.

× But I have heard that damp area is really beautiful and thus really beautiful parks in it.

✓ But I have heard that the damp area is really beautiful and that there are some beautiful parks there.

Sentence is awkward and missing articles and verbs. Add the definite article 'the' before 'damp area' if referring to a known area. Replace 'thus really beautiful parks in it' with 'there are some beautiful parks there' to form a complete clause with subject and verb. Ensure clarity by using proper sentence structure and placing 'there' at the end for location reference.