Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, with a good topic sentence and supporting details. Improve by correcting small grammar errors, removing repetition, and using a linking phrase to make it smoother. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., 'primary school' → 'elementary school' or 'when I was younger'). Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes — I loved going to parks as a child. When I was in primary school there was a small park near my home, so I went there almost every day to play with my friends. Because of that, I have many happy memories of outdoor games and picnics.

Sugestão: The answer is direct but has grammar mistakes, hesitations and unclear phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and repetition. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I don't enjoy outdoor activities at the moment, so I usually prefer staying at home to read or work on personal projects. Because of my busy schedule and personal preferences, I rarely visit parks these days.

Sugestão: Good content and clear opinion. Improve by using smoother linking words and more natural phrasing (e.g., 'I think more parks would be beneficial' ), correct minor awkward words (e.g., 'adult people' → 'adults'), and give a specific example or reason. Keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I think more parks would benefit both the city and its residents because they provide safe places for children to play and meet friends. In addition, adults can use parks for exercise such as jogging or group fitness classes, which improves public health.

Sugestão: Your answer communicates your preference but contains grammar errors and repetition. Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, one clear reason, and perhaps offering a brief exception or condition (linking word like 'although' or 'unless'). Correct phrasing (e.g., 'any park' not 'any part') and avoid repeating previous statements.

Exemplo: Not really — I usually don't plan to visit parks in the future because I prefer indoor activities and my schedule is very busy. However, I might go to a park occasionally if a friend invites me or there is a special event.

× I went to a park every day after after I left school.

✓ I went to a park every day after I left school.

Repeated word 'after' is a simple typo; remove the extra 'after'. The past tense 'went' and 'left' are correct and match the time frame.

× If I was in primary school, there was a park near my home and I went there to play with my friends almost every day.

✓ When I was in primary school, there was a park near my home and I went there to play with my friends almost every day.

Using 'If' suggests a conditional; 'When' correctly indicates a past habitual time. Tenses (was, was, went) remain past and appropriate.

× No, I don't like to go parks now.

✓ No, I don't like to go to parks now.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Add 'to' to form 'go to parks'.

× I prefer to stay in home and, uh, doing some, do something that I like.

✓ I prefer to stay at home and do things that I like.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'home' in this context. After 'prefer to', use the base form 'do', not the -ing form. Replace 'doing some, do something' with 'do things' for natural phrasing and correct verb form.

× I prefer to stay at home and do things that I like.

✓ I prefer to stay at home and do things that I like.

This sentence is corrected above; note that after 'prefer to' the base verb 'do' is correct. No -ing form is needed here.

× Yes, I love to.

✓ Yes, I would.

The short response 'Yes, I love to' is colloquial but slightly awkward following 'Would you like to see more parks?'. 'Yes, I would' or 'Yes, I would like to' matches the modal question. This addresses pragmatic correctness rather than strict grammar.

× Parents can bring their children to go there to make some more friends, and also adult people can go there to, uh, exercise or like running.

✓ Parents can bring their children there to make more friends, and adults can go there to exercise or run.

Remove 'to go' after 'bring'—'bring someone there' is sufficient. Use 'adults' instead of 'adult people' for natural noun usage. Use parallel verbs 'exercise or run' rather than 'like running'.

× No, I don't want to go any part in the future.

✓ No, I don't want to go to any park in the future.

'Part' is a typo for 'park'. Add preposition 'to' with 'go' and use 'any park' as the intended noun.

× Like I say, I don't like outdoor activities and I think it's boring to go to a park.

✓ Like I said, I don't like outdoor activities and I think it's boring to go to a park.

Use past 'said' when referring to what you previously mentioned. The rest of the sentence correctly uses present simple for general preference.

× I don't have enough time just to stay there or to run there, to enjoy life or other things.

✓ I don't have enough time just to stay there or to run there to enjoy life or do other things.

Remove the comma before the final infinitive phrase to connect purpose naturally: 'run there to enjoy...'. Also 'do other things' is clearer and grammatical compared with 'other things' alone.