Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and correct grammar, keep it concise and add a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid redundancy and correct singular/plural and tense errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went on weekends to meet friends, and we usually played games such as hide-and-seek, which was my favourite.

Sugestão: This answer is natural and coherent but can be tightened: correct small articles and plural forms, and use a clearer linking phrase for contrast. Keep within five sentences and add a brief reason for relaxing to give more depth.

Exemplo: I rarely visit parks now because of a busy work schedule. However, occasionally I take my daughter to the nearby municipal park, where she plays on the swings while I sit on a bench to relax and watch her.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, article use) and complete the final thought. Use linking words (for example, also, moreover) and provide one clear specific reason or example rather than vague statements.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city. Parks encourage children to be active and make friends, and moreover they provide green spaces that improve air quality. The local government should ensure basic maintenance, such as regular cleaning and safe play equipment.

Sugestão: Correct minor grammar (articles, plural forms) and avoid repetition. Add a linking word to explain why the visit is planned and include one specific detail about the park experience to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, I plan to take my daughter to a children's park a few kilometres away. It has a small deer enclosure, and I think she will enjoy watching the deer because she is fascinated by animals.

× I liked visiting the parks when I was a child.

✓ I liked visiting parks when I was a child.

Redundant definite article 'the' is unnecessary with general plural 'parks' when speaking about parks in general; this is more about article usage but affects past-tense sentence flow. Use 'parks' without 'the' for general reference. Suggestion: Remove 'the' when referring to parks in general.

× I went there during the weekends to meet my friends.

✓ I went there on weekends to meet my friends.

'During the weekends' is awkward: use 'on weekends' or 'at the weekend' depending on variety. This fixes plural handling and preposition choice. Suggestion: Use 'on weekends' for habitual past actions.

× I loved playing with them and my most favorite games was the hide and seek.

✓ I loved playing with them and my favorite game was hide-and-seek.

'Most favorite' is redundant; 'favorite' suffices. 'Games was' shows subject-verb agreement error: singular 'game' with singular verb 'was'. 'the hide and seek' should be 'hide-and-seek' without 'the'. Suggestion: Use 'my favorite game was hide-and-seek.'

× To be honest, I rarely visit the parks these days because of my tight work schedule.

✓ To be honest, I rarely visit parks these days because of my tight work schedule.

Again, 'the parks' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Present simple 'visit' correctly expresses habitual present. Remove 'the' to be natural. Suggestion: Say 'visit parks' for general reference.

× However, once in a blue moon, I take my daughter to the nearby municipal park.

✓ However, once in a blue moon I take my daughter to the nearby municipal park.

Comma after the adverbial phrase 'once in a blue moon' is optional; original isn't strictly wrong but removing the comma improves flow. No major grammar error; left as minor punctuation improvement. Suggestion: You can omit the comma for smoother speech.

× She enjoys playing in the swings, and I sit on a bench and relax.

✓ She enjoys playing on the swings, and I sit on a bench and relax.

Standard collocation is 'play on the swings' not 'play in the swings'. Suggestion: Use 'on the swings' for correct prepositional collocation.

× Yes, it would be great if more recreational places are being built in and around the cities.

✓ Yes, it would be great if more recreational places were built in and around the city.

After 'would be great if' a subjunctive/past form 'were built' is appropriate to express hypothetical; also 'cities' should match 'my city' context—use 'the city' or 'my city'. Suggestion: Use 'were built' for hypothetical situations and 'the city' for singular reference.

× Children loves the parks, it keeps them healthy and they also get a chance to make new friends while playing.

✓ Children love parks; it keeps them healthy, and they also get a chance to make new friends while playing.

'Children' is plural so verb must be 'love' not 'loves'. Also 'the parks' -> 'parks' for general statement. The original is a comma splice: use semicolon or split sentences. Suggestion: Use 'Children love parks; it keeps them healthy, and they also get a chance to make new friends while playing.'

× In addition, the government need to ensure the basic.

✓ In addition, the government needs to ensure the basics.

'Government' as a singular noun takes 'needs' not 'need'. 'the basic' is incomplete; use 'the basics' or 'basic services' to specify what should be ensured. Suggestion: Specify what 'basics' are (basic facilities/services) and use 'needs'.

× Yes, I have plans to take my daughter to a children's park which is located few kilometres from my home.

✓ Yes, I have plans to take my daughter to a children's park which is located a few kilometres from my home.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'few kilometres'. Use 'a few kilometres' to indicate approximate distance. Suggestion: Say 'a few kilometres'.

× The park has different species of deer and I believe my daughter will enjoy seeing them because she loves deers a lot.

✓ The park has different species of deer and I believe my daughter will enjoy seeing them because she loves deer a lot.

The plural of 'deer' is 'deer', not 'deers'. Use 'deer' for both singular and plural. Suggestion: Use 'deer' for the plural form.