Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваша відповідь зрозуміла, але має граматичні помилки, відсутня конкретика і звучить трохи незграбно. Поради: 1) Використовуйте правильну граматику: «I would like to take a picture of New York City.» 2) Додайте одну-дві речення з конкретними деталями (що саме ви хотіли б сфотографувати і чому). 3) Дотримуйтеся максимум 4–5 речень, використовуйте зв’язки (because, for example) для плавності.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I would love to take a picture of New York City, especially the skyline at dusk because the lights and tall buildings create a dramatic scene.

Sugestão: Відповідь нечітка і суперечлива — ви сказали обидва варіанти без пояснення. Поради: 1) Вибирайте одну позицію або пояснюйте, коли ви віддаєте перевагу кожному типу. 2) Додайте причини або приклади, використовуючи зв’язки (however, while, because). 3) Тримайте відповідь у 2–4 реченнях.

Exemplo: I generally prefer urban views because I like the energy and architectural variety, but sometimes I enjoy rural views for their peaceful scenery. For instance, city skylines interest me for photography, while I go to the countryside to relax.

Sugestão: Фраза містить помилки в прийменниках і структуруванні. Поради: 1) Використовуйте правильний прийменник: «in another country» або «in other countries». 2) Дайте коротку причину, чому ви віддаєте перевагу іншим країнам (наприклад, різноманітність ландшафтів). 3) Додайте конкретний приклад і дотримуйтеся 2–3 речень.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to see America’s diverse scenery, such as city skylines and national parks, which are very different from what I usually see in Ukraine.

× Yes, I like and I would like take a picture from New York, NY City.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures and I would like to take a picture in New York City.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb requires the -ing form for general preferences (like taking). 'Would like' requires the infinitive with to (to take). Also use 'in New York City' rather than 'from New York, NY City' for location. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for habits/preferences and 'would like + to + verb' for polite desires. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer views in urban areas and rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas.

When comparing two alternatives, use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A and B'. Also use 'those in' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' to show comparison. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I prefer views on another country. This country is America, but I live in Ukraine.

✓ I prefer views in another country. That country is America, but I live in Ukraine.

Use 'in' with countries ('in another country') not 'on'. Also 'that country' is more natural than 'this country' when referring back to a previously mentioned place. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations like countries and match demonstrative pronoun to context. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I like and I would like take a picture from New York, NY City.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures and I would like to take a picture in New York City.

Omit redundant commas and abbreviations; include articles where needed (a picture). 'a picture' is required before singular countable nouns. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns and avoid redundant geographic tags. Grammar problem type ID:22