Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response more concise and natural by removing filler words and repeating phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'landscapes', 'seascapes', 'sunset glow') to avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing landscapes, especially seascapes at sunset. For example, I often capture the warm glow on the water because it creates striking colours and a calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however') to contrast briefly with urban views. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences; give one specific example of a rural scene and one contrasting urban feature.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and refreshing. For instance, I enjoy open fields and nearby mountains that help me unwind; however, urban night views with city lights can be impressive for their energy and architecture.

Sugestão: Be more specific and avoid repetitive phrases. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give clear reasons with examples. Replace vague claims like 'already seen all' with precise explanations (e.g., 'I want new landscapes and cultures'). Limit to two or three sentences and use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultural scenes. For example, I love photographing coastal sunsets and the golden hour abroad, which often offer different colours and coastal shapes than what I’m used to at home.

× I would say that I am fond of taking pictures of beautiful sceneries, especially sunsets or sunsets with the sea.

✓ I would say that I am fond of taking pictures of beautiful scenery, especially sunsets over the sea.

The plural 'sceneries' is incorrect in this context; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun. Also, 'sunsets with the sea' is unnatural; use the preposition 'over' to describe sunsets seen above the sea. Suggestion: use uncountable nouns correctly and choose appropriate prepositions for natural phrasing. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× I would say I prefer reviews in rural areas.

✓ I would say I prefer views in rural areas.

The word 'reviews' is a typographical or word-choice error; the intended noun is 'views' (plural of 'view'). Use the correct plural form to match meaning. Suggestion: proofread for similar-looking words and ensure the noun matches the intended meaning. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× From my perspective they tend to be.

✓ From my perspective, they tend to be more peaceful.

The original sentence is incomplete and vague ('they tend to be' what?). It lacks the adjective or complement describing 'they'. Complete the sentence with the intended adjective and add a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: ensure sentences include necessary complements and punctuation for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× They tend to be much more peaceful and refreshing.

✓ They tend to be much more peaceful and refreshing.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses comparative intensifier 'much more' appropriately with adjectives 'peaceful' and 'refreshing'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× I really enjoy seeing uh, open fields, mountains, forests.

✓ I really enjoy seeing open fields, mountains, and forests.

The filler 'uh' should be omitted in written form. Also add the conjunction 'and' before the final item in the list for standard coordination. Suggestion: remove spoken fillers when converting to written answers and use proper list punctuation. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× They help me to relax from everyday stress.

✓ They help me relax from everyday stress.

The infinitive 'to relax' can be used, but 'help me relax' is more natural; however the preposition 'from' is acceptable here. No major grammatical error, only style. If focusing on preposition, 'relax from' is acceptable but 'relax and reduce everyday stress' is clearer. Suggestion: prefer concise constructions: 'They help me relax from everyday stress.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× But however in urban areas, especially at the night, you can see uh city lights and modern.

✓ However, in urban areas, especially at night, you can see city lights and modern buildings.

Using both 'But' and 'however' together is redundant; choose one. 'At the night' is incorrect; use 'at night' or 'in the night'. The filler 'uh' should be removed. The word 'modern' requires a noun to modify; add 'buildings' or similar. Suggestion: avoid redundant conjunctions, use correct time prepositions, and ensure adjectives modify nouns. Grammar Problem Type ID: 16

× First of all, I want to say that I'm a big fan of traveling.

✓ First of all, I want to say that I'm a big fan of travel.

Both 'traveling' and 'travel' are acceptable; 'fan of travel' is slightly more natural in British English while 'fan of traveling' is acceptable in American English. This is a style choice rather than a strict error. If treating as preposition/gerund choice, prefer 'fan of travel' for conciseness. Suggestion: be consistent with regional preferences. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× Uh, in addition, I've already seen all the beautiful views, all the beautiful sceneries in my country.

✓ In addition, I have already seen all the beautiful views and scenery in my country.

'Sceneries' is incorrect; use uncountable 'scenery'. Using present perfect 'have seen' is acceptable to indicate experience up to now. Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'all the beautiful'. Suggestion: avoid duplication and use uncountable nouns correctly. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× So I prefer views in other countries because I like the sea and the sunsets, the golden hour, and they are so breathtaking for me.

✓ So I prefer views in other countries because I like the sea and sunsets during the golden hour; they are breathtaking to me.

The pronoun 'they' is ambiguous but understandable; rephrase for clarity. 'Breathtaking for me' is less natural than 'breathtaking to me'. Remove the article before 'sunsets' when speaking generally. Suggestion: simplify and reorder to avoid pronoun ambiguity and use natural collocations like 'breathtaking to me.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 12