Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 首先要直接回应考官问题，开头给出明确观点，然后用一到两句简洁、具体的细节支持观点。注意发音和词汇准确性（如 landscape, wide shot, candid/steal shot），避免重复无意义的填充词（you know, umm）。句子不要过长，控制在最多五句内，使用连词（for example, but, because）使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. For landscapes I usually take a wide shot to capture the whole scene, because it shows the surroundings clearly. But for people I prefer candid shots from different angles, as they look more natural and lively.

Sugestão: 回答要更直接并注意语法（例如 use 'I was born and raised in a big city'），避免俚语或口头语（you know）。给出一两条具体理由并用连词连接，如 'because' 和 'for example'，控制在三到五句内，丰富词汇（convenient → conveniences, job opportunities）。

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas. I was born and raised in a big city, so I appreciate the job opportunities and the convenient transportation. For example, there are more shops and public transport options in cities than in rural areas.

Sugestão: 先给出明确立场（I prefer...），然后用具体例子和简短理由支持，例如提到某国的特色风景或风格。注意发音和词形（Australia, the UK, European countries），避免重复填充词并提高流利度。控制句子数并使用连接词（for example, such as, because）。

Exemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because they often have different landscapes and historical architecture. For example, I enjoyed the countryside in the UK with its green rolling hills, and parts of Europe where old towns and coastlines are very picturesque.

× You know where I take a landscape pictures, I normally just take the white shot, you know they got this the whole view.

✓ You know, when I take landscape pictures, I normally just take a wide shot that captures the whole view.

句子结构混乱：原句中“where I take a landscape pictures”结构错误且“a landscape pictures”在数量和冠词上不一致；“white shot”为拼写或用词错误，应为“wide shot”；需用定语从句或时间/条件副词从句“when I take…”来表达习惯行为。改正建议：用“when I take landscape pictures”引导时间状语，把复数名词与冠词对应好（landscape pictures 不加 a），并将“white”改为正确的“wide”，最后补充“that captures the whole view”使句子完整明确。

× But when I take pictures for people, I would like to take the people from different angles, you know, when they are in the on the go, in the move, the steel shot.

✓ But when I take pictures of people, I like to photograph them from different angles, you know, when they are on the go or in motion — the still shot.

介词和短语使用错误：英语中通常说“take pictures of people”而不是“for people”；“take the people”不自然，应使用“photograph them”或“take pictures of them”；短语“in the on the go, in the move”混用不当，应为“on the go”或“in motion”；“steel shot”拼写错误，应为“still shot”。改正建议：使用正确介词“of”，用代词“them”代替重复名词，选择正确短语“on the go / in motion”，并把“still”替换错误拼写。

× And I was born and raised in big city, so I kind of prefer urban life, you know, I think there was more a job opportunities and there's more convenient in urban areas than the rural areas.

✓ I was born and raised in a big city, so I kind of prefer urban life. I think there are more job opportunities and it's more convenient in urban areas than in rural areas.

单复数和冠词错误：缺少不定冠词“a”修饰“big city”；“more a job opportunities”中“a”与复数“opportunities”冲突，应为“more job opportunities”；“there was”时态与主语不一致，正确为“there are”；“there's more convenient”结构错误，应为“it's more convenient”或“things are more convenient”。改正建议：在可数单数名词前加冠词，保持主谓一致，复数名词不用不定冠词，用“it is”表“更方便”。

× You know they got this the whole view.

✓ They have this whole view.

时态和非正式口语缩写：原句“they got”是口语过去式或非标准用法，正式表达应使用一般现在时“they have”来描述当前状态；此外“this the whole view”多余定冠词“the”，应为“this whole view”或“the whole view”。改正建议：用一般现在时“have”或更自然表达“it shows the whole view”，并删除多余词语。

× I probably prefer the views in other countries, umm, like umm, this, the countries I've been to, uh, UK, Australian, umm, the countries in Europe, uh, European continents, I think they are quite beautiful.

✓ I probably prefer the views in other countries. For example, the countries I've been to — the UK, Australia and other European countries — I think they are quite beautiful.

形容词/名词形式错误和冗余表达：“Australian”是形容词，指“澳大利亚的”，作为国家名应使用名词“Australia”；“countries in Europe”与“European continents”重复且“European continents”用词不当（欧洲不是多个大陆）；句子过长且结构松散。改正建议：使用正确的国家名词（UK, Australia），合并重复表达为“European countries”，并拆分为更简洁的句子。