Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (use 'a favorite hobby' → 'a favorite hobby' is redundant; better: 'one of my favorite hobbies').

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Photography is one of my favorite hobbies when I go out, and I especially enjoy capturing landscapes and street scenes because they show different moods and lighting.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar, and give a clear reason. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'however' and avoid vague phrases like 'attract me a lot.' Be specific about what appeals to you in urban views.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and busy streets; for example, I like photographing old buildings, colorful markets, and the contrast between people and structures.

Sugestão: Make the comparison grammatically correct and give concrete reasons or examples. Avoid absolute claims like 'better than any other country.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes and wildlife are familiar and diverse; for example, our coastal cliffs and native forests offer unique colors and animals I love to photograph.

× Photography is one of my favorite hobby when I'm going outside.

✓ Photography is one of my favorite hobbies when I go outside.

The noun 'hobby' needs the plural form 'hobbies' because of 'one of my' (plural). Also the article error arises from number mismatch. Additionally, 'when I'm going outside' is awkward; use simple present 'when I go outside' for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use plural with 'one of my' and simple present for habitual actions.

× I'm taking different type of picture of different views and I enjoyed it a lot.

✓ I take different types of pictures of various views, and I enjoy it a lot.

Present continuous 'I'm taking' is inappropriate for a habitual activity; use simple present 'I take'. 'Different type of picture' has number agreement errors: 'types' and 'pictures' plural and 'of various views' is clearer. 'I enjoyed it a lot' mixes past with present; change to 'I enjoy it a lot' to match habitual tense. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and ensure noun number agreement.

× Actually I live in a city, so when I'm going outside I love to take picture urban area because it's attract me a lot and the nature and the view also attract me a lot so.

✓ Actually I live in a city, so when I go outside I love to take pictures of urban areas because they attract me a lot, and the nature and the views attract me a lot as well.

Fix prepositions and articles: 'take picture urban area' should be 'take pictures of urban areas'. 'It's attract me' is incorrect verb form and pronoun; use 'they attract me' to agree with plural 'urban areas'. 'the nature and the view' -> 'nature and the views' or 'the nature and the views' for parallelism. Use simple present 'I go outside' for habitual action. Suggestion: Use 'take pictures of' + plural nouns and match pronouns to their antecedents; keep verb tense consistent.

× I live in a beautiful country, so I prefer my own country because it's full of beauty and the nature and the trees, the animals are too good than any other country.

✓ I live in a beautiful country, so I prefer my own country because it is full of beautiful scenery; the trees and the animals are better than in any other country.

Article and comparative errors: 'full of beauty' is acceptable but 'beautiful scenery' is more natural. 'the nature' is uncountable; use 'the trees and the animals' without extra 'the' or rephrase. 'are too good than any other country' incorrectly uses 'too' with 'than' and lacks comparator structure; use 'better than in any other country.' Suggestion: Use correct comparative 'better than' and avoid 'too' when comparing; use natural collocations like 'beautiful scenery.'