Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğal fakat karışık ve tekrarlayıcı. Konuya doğrudan başlayın, gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerinden (uh, um) kaçının ve destekleyici ayrıntıları daha açık ve spesifik verin. Ayrıca en fazla 3-4 cümle kullanın ve bağlaçlarla fikirleri düzenli ifade edin. Örneğin neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğinizi, hangi tür manzaraları tercih ettiğinizi ve bir kısa örnek verin.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture moments and remember places. For instance, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to preserve the changing light and colours. I also save these photos in albums on my phone so I can look back on memories.

Sugestão: Cevap açık fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, gerekçeyi bir veya iki net destekleyici cümleyle açın ve bağlaçlarla ilişki kurun. Örneğin hangi öğeleri çekmeyi sevdiğinizi ve nedenlerini belirtin. Ayrıca gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından kaçının.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing architecture, busy streets and people. For example, I like capturing cars and pedestrians in motion to show the energy of the city. This gives me interesting compositions and dynamic photos.

Sugestão: Cevap net ama karışık ve yanlış kelime kullanımı (reef?s), dilbilgisi ve tekrar sorunları var. "Other countries" tercih sebeplerini açık ve spesifik verin; örneğin kültürel farklılıkların ve yeni manzaraların fotoğrafçılığınıza nasıl katkı sağladığını anlatın. Konuşmada temiz cümle yapıları, doğru kelime seçimi ve bağlaçlar kullanın.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I can discover different cultures and unique landscapes. For example, visiting a foreign market lets me capture colourful clothing and local customs that I don't see at home. These experiences broaden my perspective and inspire new photo ideas.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views because, uh, this is the very good way to, uh, see pictures, uh, history.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because this is a very good way to see the history in photos.

The main issues are plural form and noun usage with the gerund. 'Taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural) to match general activity. 'The very good way to, uh, see pictures, uh, history' is disfluent and unclear; use 'a very good way to see the history in photos' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures' and simplify the clause after because to make a clear meaning.

× For example, if you're taking a picture, uh, on the app, you can see different things or down you can see another.

✓ For example, if you take a picture with an app, you can see different things in it or see others below.

Incorrect preposition use: 'taking a picture on the app' is awkward; 'with an app' or 'using an app' is better. 'Down you can see another' is unclear; likely meant 'below you can see another' or 'see others below'. Suggestion: use 'with' or 'using' for tools and 'in it' or 'below' for position.

× I always prefer for views in urban areas because of the I really like to take cars, buildings, people, especially walking people.

✓ I always prefer views in urban areas because I really like to photograph cars, buildings, and people, especially people walking.

Wrong preposition 'prefer for' should be 'prefer' (no 'for'). 'Take cars, buildings, people' is incorrect verb-object usage: use 'photograph' or 'take pictures of' followed by plural nouns. 'Walking people' is awkward; 'people walking' is natural. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'for', use 'photograph' or 'take pictures of', and place 'walking' after 'people'.

× So the urban areas very good for me.

✓ So urban areas are very good for me.

Missing verb 'are' causes a sentence structure error. Use the verb to be for a complete sentence: 'urban areas are very good for me.' Suggestion: include the appropriate form of 'be' to match plural subject.

× I prefer reefs, uh, in another country because, uh, I really like to see a different cultures and different peoples.

✓ I prefer views in another country because I really like to see different cultures and different people.

'Reefs' is likely a wrong word choice; context indicates 'views'. 'I prefer reefs in another country' is incorrect. 'A different cultures' mixes singular article with plural noun; should be 'different cultures'. 'Different peoples' is unnatural in this context; use 'different people'. Suggestion: replace 'reefs' with 'views', remove the article before 'different cultures', and use 'people'.

× Uh, this is the best way to, uh, do in another countries.

✓ This is the best way to do that in another country.

Incorrect preposition and pluralization: 'do in another countries' should be 'do that in another country' or 'do it in other countries' depending on meaning. Also 'another countries' mixes singular 'another' with plural 'countries'. Suggestion: match 'another' with singular 'country' or use 'other' with plural 'countries' and clarify the verb object ('do that' or 'experience it').

× Uh, because of that, I prefer we use another countries.

✓ Because of that, I prefer to use other countries.

Incorrect pronoun and verb form: 'I prefer we use' is ungrammatical here; likely meant 'I prefer to use' or 'I prefer going to other countries.' 'Another countries' is wrong: 'another' must be singular; use 'other countries'. Suggestion: change phrase to 'I prefer to use other countries' or better 'I prefer to visit other countries' depending on intended meaning.