Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and articles, avoid repetition, and make a clear topic sentence with one or two supporting details. Be concise (max 5 sentences) and include linking words if giving examples. For instance, say what kinds of views you like and why, then give one brief example.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially cityscapes and street scenes. For example, I like capturing the contrast between old and new buildings because it tells a story about the place. I also sometimes photograph people to record everyday life.

Sugestão: Clarify and organize your answer: begin with a direct response, then explain why with specific details. Use linking words (e.g., because, for example, sometimes) and correct vocabulary (use 'projects', 'subjects', 'scenes' instead of 'screens'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on the project; I don't have a single preference. Because I studied Fine Arts, I choose urban scenes when I need architectural textures and rural scenes when I want natural landscapes. For example, a recent project focused on portraits in city streets, while another explored light in the countryside.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct preference and specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases—say 'other countries' or 'other cities' and explain why (e.g., variety, fewer distractions). Use linking words like 'because' and give one short example. Keep it concise and correct verb tense.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing in other cities because they offer different architecture and cultural scenes. For example, when I shoot in my hometown there are often too many people in the same spots, but abroad I can find new perspectives and quieter locations that suit my projects.

× 'Yes, I like taking pictures my city or another country or sometimes I I taking pictures of people.'

✓ 'Yes, I like taking pictures of my city or of other countries, and sometimes I take pictures of people.'

'Sentence structure errors: missing preposition and auxiliary verb. Add preposition of after taking pictures, use of other countries for parallel structure, remove duplicated I, and use simple present take to match like and habitual action.'

× 'Actually it depends on my project. I graduated Fine Arts university and I have a lot of different projects, sometimes particularly use people screens, sometimes urban screens, sometimes rural screens actually.'

✓ 'Actually, it depends on my project. I graduated from a Fine Arts university and I have a lot of different projects. Sometimes I particularly use people as subjects, sometimes urban scenes, and sometimes rural scenes.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure errors: add from after graduated, include article a before Fine Arts university, split into clear sentences, and replace incorrect nouns screens with subjects or scenes to convey intended meaning. Also ensure parallel structure with commas and conjunctions.'

× 'I prefer another city because of that it's packed my city for example, or for instance when I when I taking picture and there are many people around.'

✓ 'I prefer another city because my city is crowded, for example when I take pictures and there are many people around.'

'Sentence structure and tense errors: replace awkward phrase because of that it's packed my city with because my city is crowded, use take (simple present) instead of taking to match habitual action, remove repeated when I, and reorder clauses for clarity.'