Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun phrases and verb forms, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating similar adjectives.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, particularly sunsets, beaches and trees. For example, sunsets often have warm, dramatic colours, which make my photos more striking, and taking these pictures helps me relax.

Sugestão: Correct word choice mistakes and organize into a clear topic sentence plus supporting reasons with linking words. Replace incorrect word 'pathogenic' and unclear 'St. scenes' with appropriate vocabulary like 'diverse' and 'street scenes.' Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because they offer more diverse and dynamic subjects. For instance, the architecture and busy street scenes provide variety, and the lively cafés and public spaces create interesting photo opportunities.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Give a concise topic sentence, then one specific example comparing home and abroad, with a linking word like 'because' or 'for example.'

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different architectural styles and cultural scenes. For example, photographing a foreign city can reveal unique building designs and street cafés that I don't see at home, which makes the experience more exciting.

× I find this scenes very peaceful and photographing them helps me relax and more serene.

✓ I find these scenes very peaceful, and photographing them helps me relax and feel more serene.

'This scenes' uses singular demonstrative with plural noun; change to 'these scenes'. Also sentence lacked a verb after 'more serene'; add 'feel' to complete the predicate and make meaning clear. Suggestion: match demonstrative to noun number and ensure each clause has a verb.

× I think I like both areas, but I more prefer urban areas because the views are more pathogenic.

✓ I think I like both areas, but I prefer urban areas because the views are more photogenic.

'More prefer' is incorrect: 'prefer' already expresses comparison, so do not add 'more'. Use just 'prefer'. 'Pathogenic' is the wrong word (means disease-causing); the intended adjective is 'photogenic'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' without 'more' and choose the correct adjective 'photogenic'.

× The architecture, varied cityscapes and St. scenes make for interesting pictures.

✓ The architecture, varied cityscapes, and street scenes make for interesting pictures.

'St.' is an unclear abbreviation; likely 'street' was intended. Also commas needed in a list. Suggestion: avoid unclear abbreviations in speaking transcripts and include commas to separate list items.

× The atmosphere in towns is also livelier with cafes and public spaces.

✓ The atmosphere in towns is also livelier because of cafes and public spaces.

Sentence is understandable but 'with cafes and public spaces' is stylistically weaker than 'because of'. Use 'because of' to show cause more clearly. This is a word choice/style issue classified under adjectives/adverbs/adverbials.

× I prefer the views in another countries because as I said, it has a different vibes.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because, as I said, they have a different vibe.

'Another countries' mixes singular 'another' with plural 'countries'—use 'other countries'. 'It has' incorrectly refers to plural 'countries'; use 'they have'. 'Different vibes' should be singular 'a different vibe' or keep plural consistently; here 'a different vibe' sounds natural. Suggestion: ensure demonstratives/quantifiers agree in number and pronouns agree with their antecedents.

× The structures, the buildings, the cityscapes, the landscapes, the cafes it has.

✓ The structures, the buildings, the cityscapes, the landscapes, and the cafes it has.

This fragment is ungrammatical as a standalone sentence and needs proper conjunctions and a subject-verb structure. Adding 'and' helps list items, but better is to integrate into a full sentence: 'It has structures, buildings, cityscapes, landscapes, and cafes.' Suggestion: form a complete sentence with correct word order and a verb.

× It brings a different kind of vibe when you take a pictures.

✓ It brings a different kind of vibe when you take pictures.

'A pictures' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'pictures'; remove 'a'. The error falls under article/plural mismatch and present participle phrasing. Suggestion: ensure article matches noun number: use 'a picture' (singular) or 'pictures' without 'a'. Here 'take pictures' is natural.