Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and shows reasons, but it is slightly wordy and has some grammatical issues (plural/singular and article use). Make it more concise, use correct collocations (e.g., 'beautiful scenery' not 'sceneries'), and include a clear topic sentence followed by one specific supporting detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, photographing a mountain scene lets me focus on changing light and textures, which deepens my appreciation. Also, I often reflect on why a place feels special, so photography makes those observations more meaningful.

Sugestão: Good attempt to balance both options, but the answer is vague and contains simple repetition and grammar mistakes. Give a brief topic sentence with a clear preference (or balanced view), then add one specific contrast using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'for instance'). Avoid saying 'good side and bad side'—be specific about what you mean.

Exemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. For instance, urban areas have striking architecture and lively street scenes, while rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and open skies. However, I tend to choose rural views when I want calm and urban scenes when I want energy.

Sugestão: The answer is very short, repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'I enjoy views both at home and abroad') and then give one specific reason for each, using a linking word like 'because' or 'while'. This will make your response more coherent and informative.

Exemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad because they offer different perspectives. For example, domestic views remind me of familiar cultural details and memories, while views in other countries expose me to new landscapes and architectural styles. So I appreciate both for different reasons.

× I like taking pictures of different views, not only because I get to see wonderful landscape, beautiful sceneries, but also understand better the meaning behind them.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, not only because I get to see wonderful landscapes and beautiful scenery, but also because I can understand better the meaning behind them.

Singular and plural forms: 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'pictures of different views'. 'sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenery' (uncountable). Parallel structure and missing 'because' and auxiliary: add 'because' before second clause and 'can' to complete the verb phrase. Suggestion: use consistent plurality and maintain parallel connectors (not only... but also).','grammar_problem_type_id':1},{