Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles, pronouns) and avoid filler words. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary like "wildlife," "sunrise," and "memorable."

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views. For example, in forests I often photograph wildlife to capture spontaneous moments, and at the beach I take sunrise photos because the colors are especially dramatic.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (use plural/singular and remove repetitions). Use vocabulary like "countryside," "natural scenery," and "wide-open spaces." Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because the countryside offers more natural scenery and wide-open spaces, which let me capture sweeping landscapes and peaceful scenes.

Sugestão: State your preference directly, then give specific reasons with linking words. Remove fillers and unclear phrases; correct grammar (e.g., "other countries," "as a memory"). Use precise expressions like "novel scenes," "cultural differences," and "souvenirs of experiences." Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing places in other countries because the scenes are new and culturally different, so I can capture unique memories. In contrast, my home country feels familiar, so I take fewer photos there.

× I love taking pictures of different landscapes.

✓ I love taking pictures of different landscapes.

No change needed; sentence correctly uses the verb + -ing form after 'love' to express a general preference.

× Like when I go to the forest, I often take pictures of the animal here because it's quite you know, I wanna captures the beautiful moments.

✓ Like when I go to the forest, I often take pictures of the animals there because, you know, I want to capture the beautiful moments.

Errors: incorrect noun number ('animal' -> 'animals') and incorrect verb form ('wanna captures' -> 'want to capture'). Grammar problems fall under 'Verb + -ing form' for the gerund/infinitive usage and 'Singular and plural issue' for the noun. Suggested improvement: use plural 'animals' when speaking generally and use 'want to' + base verb 'capture' rather than 'wanna captures'. Also replace 'here' with 'there' for location perspective and add commas for clarity.

× And when it comes to the beach, I also take the pictures of the sunrise because it is the beautiful.

✓ And when it comes to the beach, I also take pictures of the sunrise because it is beautiful.

Errors: unnecessary definite article before a general plural/uncountable noun ('the pictures' -> 'pictures') and unnecessary definite article with adjective ('the beautiful' -> 'beautiful'). Grammar problem types: 'Article errors' and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs'. Suggestion: omit 'the' when speaking about activities in general and use the adjective 'beautiful' to describe the sunrise without an article.

× For me, I prefer taking pictures of the rural area because is the is quite natural and I can take I can shoot the beautiful landscape here.

✓ For me, I prefer taking pictures of rural areas because they are quite natural and I can shoot beautiful landscapes there.

Errors: incorrect use of 'the' and 'is' without subject ('because is the is quite natural') and singular/plural mismatch. Problems: 'There be issue' for missing verb and 'Singular and plural issue' for number agreement. Suggestion: use plural 'rural areas' for general preference, add subject 'they' with verb 'are', and use 'there' instead of 'here' for location consistency. Remove repeated 'I can'.

× So honestly, I love taking pictures of the other country because umm, it is quite new to me and I wanna capture it because I wanna give is as a memory, uh, for my own country is quite familiar to me and I say.

✓ So honestly, I love taking pictures in other countries because they are quite new to me and I want to capture them as memories, while my own country is quite familiar to me.

Errors: incorrect article and number ('the other country' -> 'other countries'), pronoun/verb agreement ('it is' -> 'they are' to match plural), informal contraction and incorrect verb form ('wanna' -> 'want to'), wrong pronoun ('give is' -> 'give them' or better 'capture them as memories'), and awkward sentence ending. Grammar problems: 'Present tense issue', 'Singular and plural issue', and 'Incorrect use of pronouns'. Suggestion: use 'other countries' for general reference, match pronouns to plural, use standard 'want to', and rephrase to 'capture them as memories' for clarity.