Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is slightly wordy and has minor grammar issues. Make the response more concise, correct tense and article usage, and add one specific detail to make it more vivid. Use a clear topic sentence, one supporting detail with a linking word, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit a scenic spot I usually photograph the landscape so I can remember the trip later; moreover, I plan to show these photos to my grandchildren in the future.

Sugestão: Good personal reason and background, but the answer is a little long and has awkward phrasing and repetition. Improve coherence by using linking words like 'because' or 'so', correct singular/plural forms, and give one specific example of a rural scene you enjoy.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a village and enjoy historical buildings and open landscapes; for instance, I love photographing old temples and rice fields that you rarely see in cities.

Sugestão: The idea is clear, but the answer is repetitive and has some grammar mistakes (articles, phrasing). Be concise: state preference, give one specific reason and an example, and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Sri Lanka has many beautiful coastal landscapes; for example, the sandy beaches and clear water on the southern coast are places I often photograph and recommend to visitors.

× Yes, since I'm a very big fan of sightseeing, whenever I travel to any attraction, I usually like to take pictures of the scenery as I could keep these photos with me and look back to it one day.

✓ Yes, since I'm a very big fan of sightseeing, whenever I travel to an attraction, I usually like to take pictures of the scenery because I can keep these photos and look back at them one day.

Errors: 'could' is a past/conditional modal but context requires present ability 'can'; 'to it' is incorrect object for 'look back' which should be 'look back at them' referring to photos; 'any attraction' is awkward, 'an attraction' fits better. Suggestion: use 'can' for present ability, use correct preposition 'at' after 'look back', and match pronoun number 'them' to 'photos'. Note: This item maps to present participle/verb form because 'could' misuse and 'look back to it' involve verb form and preposition errors, corrected under allowed types.

× Also, I can show it to my grandkids as well.

✓ Also, I can show them to my grandkids as well.

Error: 'it' is a singular pronoun but refers to plural 'photos'. Use 'them' to agree in number. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with the noun they replace.

× To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas compared to urban areas as I was brought up in a village and in rural areas there are plenty of prehistoric buildings where you would never get an opportunity to witness.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because I was brought up in a village and there are plenty of historic buildings in rural areas that you would not have the opportunity to see in the city.

Errors: 'prefer... compared to' is less natural than 'prefer... to those'; 'prehistoric buildings' is likely wrong term for old human-made buildings—'historic' fits better; word order and relative clause improved: use 'that you would not have the opportunity to see' instead of 'where you would never get an opportunity to witness'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B', choose correct adjective 'historic', and use 'see' rather than 'witness' for buildings.

× Therefore I would definitely prefer rural area.

✓ Therefore I would definitely prefer rural areas.

Error: 'rural area' is singular but context discusses rural areas in general; plural 'rural areas' matches earlier phrasing. Suggestion: keep number consistent when speaking generally.

× I prefer views in my own country since Sri Lanka is considered to be a island which is surrounded by the Indian Ocean and there are plenty of lovely beaches when you go to the coast and these beaches are so lovely that you would definitely visit.

✓ I prefer views in my own country since Sri Lanka is an island surrounded by the Indian Ocean, and there are plenty of lovely beaches along the coast that you would definitely want to visit.

Errors: 'a island' uses incorrect article; 'an' should be used before vowel sound. 'which is surrounded by' is wordy; 'surrounded by the Indian Ocean' is simpler. 'when you go to the coast' awkward—use 'along the coast'; 'you would definitely visit' sounds odd—use 'you would definitely want to visit'. Suggestion: use correct indefinite article 'an', streamline clause order, and choose appropriate verbs for ability/desire.