Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancies, and give one specific reason with an example. Use linking words like "because" and "so" appropriately. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, when I travel to a new town I take landscape photos and a few portraits to remember the trip.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear preference and give a specific reason and brief example. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "live" or "view" instead of "build"), fix grammar and reduce repetition. Use a linking phrase like "because" or "as" to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the lively architecture and cityscapes. For instance, I like photographing city skylines at sunset since the buildings and lights create dramatic images.

Sugestão: Provide a balanced answer: state your general feeling, then give a clear reason for preferring other countries with a specific detail. Use correct grammar and formal contractions (avoid "wanna"). Keep it concise and use linking words like "however" or "but" to contrast.

Exemplo: I love my country, but I prefer seeing views in other countries because I want to experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, visiting a foreign city allowed me to try new foods, visit historic sites, and photograph unfamiliar architecture.

× Yes, I really like taking picture of different views because I'm a little photogenic person, so I like to take a picture of a new places whenever I visit and I also want to take my own picture for to preserve my memory and to mix even more special.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I'm a little photogenic person, so I like to take pictures of new places whenever I visit and I also want to take my own picture to preserve my memories and to make them even more special.

Errors: 'taking picture' and 'take a picture of a new places' use singular 'picture' with contexts that require plural; this involves verb + -ing phrase and noun number (also plural issue). Correct forms: 'taking pictures' and 'take pictures of new places'. 'for to preserve' is incorrect; after 'want' use infinitive 'to preserve'. 'memory' should be plural 'memories' and 'to mix even more special' is ungrammatical — intended meaning is 'to make them even more special'. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures', match singular/plural nouns to context, use 'to' + base verb for purpose, and use 'make ... special' rather than 'mix'.

× Honestly speaking, I prefer to build in urban area because the places are very beautiful so that I can enjoy there very much and I really like to take photos there and make even more special for my.

✓ Honestly speaking, I prefer to be in urban areas because the places are very beautiful so I can enjoy them very much, and I really like to take photos there and make them even more special for me.

Errors: 'prefer to build in urban area' uses wrong verb and missing plural; should be 'prefer to be in urban areas' or 'prefer urban areas'. 'enjoy there' is incorrect preposition/object — use 'enjoy them' to refer to 'places'. 'make even more special for my' has wrong preposition and pronoun form; use 'for me' and refer back to 'photos' with 'them'. Suggestion: choose correct verbs ('be' or 'prefer urban areas'), use plural 'areas', and use appropriate object pronouns and prepositions ('enjoy them', 'for me').

× I really like my country but I prefer to view in other country because I really want to explore other country and I wanna know their culture, tourism and I want to explore different places and also want to meet many people.

✓ I really like my country but I prefer to travel to other countries because I really want to explore them, learn about their cultures and tourism, visit different places, and meet many people.

Errors: 'prefer to view in other country' uses incorrect verb 'view' and wrong prepositions/singulars. Use 'prefer to travel to other countries' or 'prefer visiting other countries'. 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. 'their culture, tourism' should be plural 'their cultures and tourism' or 'their culture and tourist attractions'. Repetition 'I want to explore different places and also want to meet' can be tightened: 'visit different places and meet many people'. Suggestion: use proper present-tense verbs ('prefer', 'want') with correct infinitives, pluralize 'country' to 'countries' when general, and avoid informal 'wanna'.