Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 어순 오류가 많고 의사 전달이 불명확합니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 직접 대답하세요(예: Yes, I do. / No, I don't.). 이후 구체적인 이유나 한 두 문장으로 부연 설명을 하세요. 시제와 동사 원형/ing 형태 사용을 바로잡고, 불필요한 단어는 빼세요. 예: ‘I don’t usually take pictures of different views. I usually take photos of a single subject, but recently I have been trying to photograph a variety of scenes.’

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take pictures of different views. I tend to focus on a single subject, like a portrait or a landmark, but recently I've been trying to photograph a wider range of scenes to improve my skills.

Sugestão: 의견은 분명하지만 비교 표현과 문법을 개선해야 합니다. ‘prefer A to B’ 형태를 사용하고, 비교할 때는 ‘more … than’ 구조를 정확히 쓰세요. 또한 구체적인 이유나 예시를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이면 더 자연스럽습니다. 예: ‘I prefer rural views to urban ones because they offer more variety and peaceful scenery, such as fields, forests, and rivers.’

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside offers more variety and peaceful scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing fields, forests, and rivers, which you don't often find in the city.

Sugestão: 생각의 흐름은 있으나 시제와 어휘 선택 오류가 많습니다. ‘When I was young’ 같은 정확한 시간 표현을 사용하고, ‘prefer’ 문장을 명확히 하세요. 또한 ‘for example’으로 예시를 자연스럽게 연결하고, 세부 이유(풍경의 다양성 등)를 덧붙이세요. 예: ‘I used to prefer views in my country when I was young, but now I prefer views in other countries, such as Australia, because they have diverse rural landscapes.’

Exemplo: I used to prefer views in my own country when I was young, but now I prefer views in other countries. For example, Australia has very diverse rural landscapes, like sweeping plains and rugged coastlines, which I find fascinating.

× I'm not right taking pictures of different views.

✓ I'm not good at taking pictures of different views.

The original sentence uses incorrect collocation 'not right' and word order; in English we say 'good at' to express skill. Use the adjective 'good' plus preposition 'at' with the gerund 'taking'. Suggestion: Use 'good at taking' or 'not good at taking' to describe ability.

× I'm I picture only one Bruce.

✓ I only take pictures of one place/person called Bruce.

The sentence has incorrect word order and unclear meaning. 'I'm I picture' is ungrammatical. Clarify subject and verb: use 'I only take pictures of...' If 'Bruce' is a person, specify 'person called Bruce'; if it's a place, replace accordingly. Suggestion: Use subject + verb structure: 'I only take pictures of...'. Replace ambiguous noun if needed.

× So I tried to taking picture of different view now.

✓ So I am trying to take pictures of different views now.

Mixes past 'tried' with present 'now' and uses incorrect gerund 'to taking'. After 'try to' use base verb 'take'. Also pluralize 'pictures' and 'views' for generality and use present continuous 'am trying' for actions happening now. Suggestion: Use 'am trying to take pictures' for current efforts.

× I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have various views than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have more variety than urban areas.

Incorrect comparative structure 'have various views than'. Use 'more variety than' or 'more varied views than'. 'Various' is not used directly with 'than'. Suggestion: Use comparative forms: 'more variety than' or 'more varied views than'.

× Oh, when I'm young I like, I prefer bills in my country, but now I prepare in other countries, example Australia.

✓ When I was young I preferred cities in my country, but now I prefer places in other countries, for example Australia.

Tense mismatch: 'when I'm young' should be past 'when I was young' and 'like' should be past 'preferred'. 'Bills' seems incorrect—likely 'cities' or 'places'. 'Prepare in other countries' is wrong; use 'prefer places in other countries'. Suggestion: Use past tense for past habits and correct nouns: 'When I was young I preferred cities in my country, but now I prefer places in other countries, for example Australia.'

× Australia is very various rural areas, so I like them.

✓ Australia has very diverse rural areas, so I like them.

'Very various rural areas' is ungrammatical: use 'diverse' or 'varied' to describe 'rural areas'. Also use 'has' to indicate possession. 'Them' refers to 'rural areas' which is acceptable. Suggestion: Say 'Australia has diverse rural areas' or 'Australia's rural areas are very varied'.