Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and repetition, give a clear topic sentence, and add one specific example. Speak more fluently and avoid filler words like "uh". Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views; it’s one of my favorite hobbies. I especially like capturing aesthetic scenes such as mountains and beaches because their colors and textures are beautiful. For example, last summer I photographed a sunset on a beach and shared the images with friends, which reminded us of that trip.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer (urban, rural, or both) and combine short repetitive sentences into one fluent response. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and give a concise reason and one specific detail about what you like.

Exemplo: I prefer views that combine urban convenience with natural elements because they help me relax. For instance, a riverside park with city skyline views lets me enjoy nature while still feeling connected to the city, which is perfect for unwinding after a busy day.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer (e.g. both) and explain briefly why, with one specific example. Correct grammar (have -> has; "the another" -> "others") and avoid vague phrases. Use a linking word to contrast or add information.

Exemplo: It depends — I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad. At home I can easily walk to nearby mountains and rivers, which is convenient and familiar; however, I also like visiting other countries to see different landscapes and cultures, such as alpine villages I saw on a trip to Switzerland.

× 'I love to take a pictures of especially aesthetic views like mountains, beaches and so on.'

✓ 'I love to take pictures of especially aesthetic views like mountains, beaches, and so on.'

'a pictures' is incorrect because the indefinite article a cannot be used with the plural noun pictures; remove the article. Also add a comma before and so on for clarity.'

× 'these memories hold various umm, uh, uh, memories which we can share with our friends too.'

✓ 'These pictures hold various memories which we can share with our friends, too.'

'these memories hold various memories' is repetitive and awkward; change the subject to 'These pictures' to match context and capitalize sentence start. Also add a comma before too. Subject-verb agreement is preserved (pictures hold).'

× 'Well, I love the views with the unique balance of urban convenience along with the natural world because it helps me.'

✓ 'Well, I love views that have a unique balance of urban convenience and the natural world because they help me.'

'the views ... it helps me' shows a mismatch: plural subject views requires plural pronoun/verb. Change 'it' to 'they' and rephrase to 'views that have' for clarity. This fixes subject-pronoun agreement.'

× 'These sceneries help me to unwind after hectic schedule.'

✓ 'These sceneries help me to unwind after a hectic schedule.'

'hectic schedule' is a singular noun phrase and requires an article. Add 'a' to make 'a hectic schedule.' Alternatively could use 'a hectic day' or 'a hectic schedule' for natural phrasing.'

× 'Well, it totally depends because my country also have quite a good sceneries which I love most.'

✓ 'Well, it totally depends because my country also has quite good scenery that I love.'

'my country also have' is incorrect: country is singular and requires 'has' (subject-verb agreement). 'Sceneries' is not natural here; use uncountable 'scenery' or 'scenic places.' Also 'which I love most' is awkward; 'that I love' is clearer.'

× 'Uh, I can go for a walk in my surrounding and having a view of mountains and rivers because my country has it.'

✓ 'I can go for a walk in my surroundings and have a view of mountains and rivers because my country has them.'

'...and having a view' mixes verb forms; coordinate parallel verbs should be 'go ... and have.' Also 'surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings.' 'my country has it' is vague and mismatches plural 'mountains and rivers'—use 'them.' These changes fix sentence structure and agreement.'

× 'Apart from that, I can go out to enjoy the another.'

✓ 'Apart from that, I can go out to enjoy others.'

'enjoy the another' is ungrammatical: 'another' requires a noun ('another view') or use plural 'others.' Choose 'others' (other views) to match context. This corrects sentence structure and word choice.'