Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise, correct grammar, and add one specific example to support your reason. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking phrase, and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, when I travel I always photograph city skylines and coastal sunsets, which later remind me of how those places felt.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, reduce hesitation words, fix grammar, and provide a specific contrast with one or two supporting details using a linking word like 'because' or 'while'.

Exemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer different aesthetics. For instance, urban areas have dramatic architecture and night lights, while rural areas have tranquil landscapes and natural colours.

Sugestão: Clarify the topic sentence (fix 'bills' to the intended word, e.g., 'buildings' or 'scenery'), correct grammar, avoid vague phrases like 'somehow', and give a specific reason or memory with one linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, especially familiar buildings and countryside, because they give me a sense of peace and nostalgia. For example, the old market square reminds me of childhood visits with my family, which is why I feel most comfortable photographing these scenes.

× Yes I do. I usually take pictures of different views because I think that it will help me hold the memories and beside I do love photographing.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually take pictures of different views because I think that it will help me preserve the memories, and besides, I really love photographing.

Errors: incorrect connector 'beside' and awkward verb phrase 'help me hold the memories'. Type 8 applies because 'photographing' usage is okay but surrounding words are incorrect. Suggestions: use 'preserve the memories' for natural collocation and 'besides' as the correct adverb meaning 'in addition'; add commas for clarity and change 'do love' to 'really love' for natural emphasis.

× Actually I prefer both of them because uh, each places they have their own aesthetic, so I love both of the scenery of urban areas and rural areas.

✓ Actually, I prefer both because each place has its own aesthetic, so I love the scenery of both urban and rural areas.

Errors: 'each places they' is ungrammatical and redundant pronoun use; 'both of them' is acceptable but 'both' is cleaner. This is type 12 (pronoun) and also subject-verb agreement (place/places). Suggestions: use 'each place has' (singular) and avoid redundant pronouns; simplify 'the scenery of both urban and rural areas.'

× I prefer bills in my own country because they somehow give me the sense of peacefulness.

✓ I prefer the buildings in my own country because they somehow give me a sense of peacefulness.

Error: 'bills' is likely a wrong word choice and 'the sense of peacefulness' is awkward; this relates to plural/singular and word choice (type 1). Suggestions: use 'buildings' if intended, include the article 'the', and use 'a sense of peacefulness' for natural phrasing.

× And secondly, I get used to them when I was a little child.

✓ Secondly, I got used to them when I was a little child.

Error: tense inconsistency: 'get used to' (present) with 'when I was a little child' (past). This is type 5. Suggestions: use past tense 'got used to' or rephrase to present perfect 'have been used to them since I was a child' depending on intended meaning.

× So yeah, I love my.

✓ So yeah, I love them.

Error: incomplete sentence; 'my' is a possessive adjective that needs a noun. This is type 26. Suggestions: replace with 'them' to refer back to the buildings/scenery, or complete the phrase (for example, 'I love my country' if that was intended').