Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Уменьшите количество заполнителей (uh, um) и повторов, чтобы ответ звучал естественно. Начните с прямого тематического предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали (какие виды вам нравятся, почему это важно) и завершите коротким заключением или планом на будущее. Используйте связки (for example, because, so) для логичности и ограничьтесь не более 3 предложений во избежание многословия.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I especially like dramatic landscapes and city skylines because they capture unique light and atmosphere, so I often try to shoot at sunrise or sunset. I hope to improve my composition skills in the future.

Sugestão: Дайте ясный тематический ответ, затем поясните выбор с конкретными деталями и связками. Избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, согласование, артикли) и сделайте структуру: утверждение + причина + пример. Старайтесь не смешивать идеи в одном длинном предложении.

Exemplo: I like both urban and rural views. For example, cities offer striking skyscrapers and busy streets that create interesting compositions, while rural areas provide peaceful landscapes and mountains ideal for nature photography. Depending on my mood, I choose one or the other.

Sugestão: Устраните запинки и повторения; сформулируйте чёткое мнение в одном предложении и добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины с примерами. Используйте связки (firstly, because, also) и проверьте грамматику (порядок слов, артикли). Не превышайте три предложения для ясности.

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because it has many breathtaking places and familiar cultural sites. For example, there are mountain regions and coastal areas where the air is fresh and the scenery feels authentic. I also enjoy showing these places to visiting friends.

× Yes, I like uh taking pictures a lot of uh beautiful, a lot of breathtaking and captivating uh views uh be uh, taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of beautiful, breathtaking, and captivating views a lot.

The original sentence misuses the gerund phrase and word order. Use 'like taking pictures of' (verb + -ing with the preposition 'of') and place modifiers before 'views'. Remove filler words. Suggestion: practice structures 'like doing something' and 'pictures of + noun'.

× It allows people to capture uh special moments uh and uh uh, it is.

✓ It allows people to capture special moments.

The original includes a redundant clause 'and... it is' which creates a fragment and repetition. Keep a single complete clause. Suggestion: avoid adding unnecessary tags; form one clear main clause.

× It is the one of my favorite hobby.

✓ It is one of my favorite hobbies.

Use 'one of' with plural noun: 'hobbies'. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary. Suggestion: when using 'one of', ensure the following noun is plural.

× I want to improve in the future.

✓ I want to improve in the future.

Sentence is grammatically correct for expressing future desire; no change needed. Keep present simple 'want' with 'in the future' to indicate future intention.

× Both options have their advantages, for example urban areas there are most of cars and the beautiful skyscrapers which allows people to capture this special moments and rural areas is more about nature and the mountain.

✓ Both options have their advantages. For example, urban areas have many cars and beautiful skyscrapers, which allow people to capture special moments, while rural areas are more about nature and the mountains.

Multiple errors: awkward clause order, incorrect pluralization, subject-verb agreement ('skyscrapers... allow'), article usage ('the mountain' -> 'the mountains' or 'mountains'), and extra words. Break into clear sentences and match subjects and verbs. Suggestion: ensure subject matches verb number, use 'many' for countable plural, and pluralize 'mountain' when speaking generally.

× I prefer undoubtedly my country umm, there there are several reasons why I uh choose this uh, the firstly, uh, my uh, in my country, uh have several uh breathtaking uh places, uh, for tourists and also local people just uh have a fresh air and just.

✓ I undoubtedly prefer my country. There are several reasons why I choose it. First, my country has several breathtaking places for tourists, and local people can enjoy fresh air.

Errors include redundant words, incorrect word order, missing subject for verb 'have', and awkward phrasing ('have a fresh air'). Replace vague fillers, supply the correct subject ('my country has'), and use uncountable noun 'fresh air' without article. Suggestion: outline points clearly: state preference, give reasons with clear subjects and verbs, and avoid fillers.