Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and enthusiastic, but it is a little repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'types of views', 'when I travel'), and limit to four or five concise sentences. Use one or two specific examples and a linking word (e.g., 'for example', 'because') to make your response coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different kinds of views, especially scenic landscapes. For example, when I travel—either abroad or within my country—I always take photos of mountain vistas because their scale and light are truly majestic. I usually take pictures to preserve memories and to share them with family later.

Sugestão: Your meaning is clear, but the answer has hesitations, repetition, and some grammar mistakes ('specially' → 'especially', 'is always been' → 'has always been'). Improve by giving a direct topic sentence, one reason with a specific detail, and a brief linking phrase. Reduce filler words and repeated phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views, especially because they connect me with nature and calm me down. For instance, in the countryside I enjoy quiet walks among fields and rivers, which helps me relax after a busy week. Therefore I usually choose rural spots for photography.

Sugestão: This answer is specific and personal, which is good, but it contains repetition and some unnatural phrasing ('I prefer views and my country', 'one can see or one can see this is the best'). To improve, begin with a clear statement, give one concise reason with a concrete detail (altitude, landscapes), and finish with a short concluding comment. Avoid repeating the same point.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, especially places like Ladakh. Because of its high altitude and open valleys, the panoramas of mountains and clear skies there are unforgettable. I loved visiting Ladakh and often choose local destinations because they offer scenes I don’t want to miss photographing.

× Yeah, I love taking pictures on different type of views because I love scenic views.

✓ Yeah, I love taking pictures of different types of views because I love scenic views.

Use of verb + -ing (taking) is fine but the preposition and noun number are incorrect. 'Taking pictures of' is the correct collocation, and 'type' should be plural 'types' to match 'views'. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures of different types of views.'

× Even if I travel abroad or in my country, I love to take pictures when I'm looking at those views and it's just magical and majestic, like one I have never seen before.

✓ Whether I travel abroad or within my country, I love to take pictures when I look at those views because they are magical and majestic, like nothing I have seen before.

'Even if' is inappropriate here; use 'whether' to contrast possibilities. 'In my country' should be 'within my country' or 'at home.' 'When I'm looking' is wordy; simple present 'when I look' fits habitual action. 'It's' and 'one' are unclear; use plural 'they are' and 'nothing I have seen before.' Suggestion: simplify tense and use correct prepositions and referents.

× So I love to take pictures over there and it's for the memories, right?

✓ So I love to take pictures there, and it's for the memories, right?

'Over there' is acceptable in speech but 'there' is more natural here; removing 'over' tightens the phrase. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use concise prepositions: 'take pictures there.'

× I prefer views and specially rural areas because those are much, you know, related to nature.

✓ I prefer views, especially rural areas, because they are more connected to nature.

'Specially' is nonstandard here; use 'especially.' 'Those are much...related' is awkward: use comparative 'more connected to nature.' Suggestion: use 'especially' and precise comparative forms.

× Nature is always been kind to me and I feel peace over there.

✓ Nature has always been kind to me, and I feel peaceful there.

'Is always been' mixes present and present perfect; use present perfect 'has always been.' 'I feel peace' is unnatural; use adjective 'peaceful.' 'Over there' -> 'there' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'has always been' and 'feel peaceful.'

× So I, I always prefer nature and I just feel peace when I'm over there.

✓ So I always prefer nature, and I just feel peaceful when I'm there.

Unnecessary filler 'I, I' and awkward 'feel peace' should be 'feel peaceful.' 'When I'm over there' is wordy; 'when I'm there' is simpler. Suggestion: remove repeated words and use adjective forms.

× I prefer views and my country because I have seen Ladakh and it is one of the most beautiful, attractive places I have ever seen in my life.

✓ I prefer the views in my country because I have been to Ladakh, and it is one of the most beautiful and attractive places I have ever seen.

Original lacks article before 'views' and misuses 'seen Ladakh' (use 'been to Ladakh' or 'seen Ladakh' but better 'been to'). Also avoid repeating 'seen' twice; reorder for clarity. Add 'the' before 'views' as definite. Suggestion: use 'the views in my country' and 'been to Ladakh.'

× One can see or one can see this is the best.

✓ One could say that it is the best.

Sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Replace duplicate 'one can see' with a concise phrase 'one could say that.' Suggestion: use concise modal or impersonal constructions.

× Ladakh is at much higher altitude so just imagine the view from there and I loved it when I went over there.

✓ Ladakh is at a much higher altitude, so just imagine the view from there; I loved it when I went there.

Need article 'a' before 'much higher altitude.' 'Went over there' is informal and repetitive; 'went there' is clearer. Add commas for clause separation. Suggestion: use 'at a much higher altitude' and avoid double 'over.'