Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, I mean), correct grammar (singular/plural) and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words if you add details.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, when I visit a scenic spot I usually photograph the landscape and nearby landmarks so I can remember the trip later.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid vague phrases and filler words, and provide one specific reason with an example using a linking word (e.g., because, therefore). Correct noun/pronoun use (e.g., ‘there are’ instead of ‘you are’).

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in urban areas because cities offer a variety of interesting subjects. For example, I enjoy capturing city skylines, street markets, and historic buildings because they provide diverse colors and textures.

Sugestão: Make a clear choice and give specific reasons. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., ‘other countries’ not ‘another countries’; ‘I love travelling’ rather than ‘I'm very travel’). Use linking words (however, because) to contrast preferences and provide one concrete example.

Exemplo: I prefer visiting other countries because I want to experience different cultures and meet new people. For instance, when I travelled to Japan, I enjoyed trying local foods and learning about traditions, which broadened my perspective.

× I am very photogenic person.

✓ I am a very photogenic person.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the noun phrase 'very photogenic person.' Use 'a' when referring to a singular countable noun. Also 'photogenic' is an adjective modifying 'person.' Suggestion: include the article 'a' for correct noun phrase structure.

× I also like to take mine photo as well, but uh.

✓ I also like to take my photos as well.

The possessive pronoun 'mine' is incorrect before a noun; use the adjectival form 'my' before 'photos.' Also 'photo' should be plural 'photos' to match general meaning. Suggestion: use 'my' + plural noun for habitual actions.

× I prefer to take a photo in both urban areas and rural areas.

✓ I prefer to take photos in both urban and rural areas.

'A photo in both urban areas and rural areas' is awkward and mismatches plurality. Use plural 'photos' and simplify 'urban and rural areas.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural pluralization for repeated actions.

× But if I have to deal, I would say urban areas because you are numerous, uh, beautiful places.

✓ But if I had to choose, I would say urban areas because they have numerous beautiful places.

'Have to deal' is incorrect idiom; use 'had to choose.' 'You are numerous' misuses 'you' and verb. Replace with 'they have numerous' to correctly refer to 'urban areas' (third-person plural) and use 'have' to show possession. Suggestion: use appropriate idioms and correct pronouns for reference.

× I like to uh, keep our photos in uh, I mean for memories and I am very photogenic person.

✓ I like to keep our photos for memories, and I am a very photogenic person.

Unnecessary filler words removed for clarity. 'Keep our photos for memories' uses verb 'keep' correctly; no -ing form needed. Also fixed article as above. Suggestion: omit filler words and use concise phrasing.

× I really like my country. I like to see my own country, but even though I prefer another countries because I want to explore there and see the different culture, different people and I want to travel many places because I'm very travel.

✓ I really like my country and I like seeing it, but I also prefer other countries because I want to explore them and see different cultures and people, and I want to travel to many places because I enjoy traveling.

Multiple pronoun and word-form errors: 'see my own country' is better as 'seeing it'; 'another countries' is incorrect plural/quantifier — use 'other countries'; 'explore there' should be 'explore them' to refer to countries; 'the different culture' should be 'different cultures' when referring generally; 'I'm very travel' is incorrect — use 'I enjoy traveling' or 'I like to travel.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with antecedents and use correct noun/verb forms for activities.