Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: correct sentence structures (e.g., “I really enjoy photography” or “I’m really into photography”), avoid repetition and reduce redundancy, and keep answers within 3–4 clear sentences. Add a brief specific detail or example to enrich the answer and use a linking word when adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I’m really into photography, especially when it comes to capturing beautiful or unusual views. For example, when I visited the coast last year I took dozens of pictures of the cliffs and sunrise because the light was dramatic. Overall, photography helps me remember places and moods.

Sugestão: Correct word choice and coherence: fix vocabulary mistakes (use “more refreshing than urban areas” not “for more refreshing as compared to rural areas”), avoid contradictory phrases, and use linking words (e.g., ‘however’, ‘because’) to connect ideas. Provide a specific example of a rural view to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I find the countryside more refreshing than the city, mainly due to the wide open spaces and natural landscapes. For instance, I love walking through fields and photographing rolling hills at sunset because the light and quiet are beautiful. However, I also appreciate city skylines for their striking architecture.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and word choice, be concise and direct: correct phrases (“I would probably prefer those in other countries”; “I’m fascinated by”), remove typos, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Give a brief specific reason and an example of a foreign view you like to strengthen content.

Exemplo: I’d probably prefer views in other countries because I’m fascinated by different landscapes, architecture and cultures. For example, I’d love to photograph the colourful streets of Lisbon or the terraced rice fields in Southeast Asia because they look so unique. That said, my own country also has many varied and beautiful places to explore.

× I really into photography, especially when it comes to capturing beautiful and unusual views.

✓ I really enjoy photography, especially when it comes to capturing beautiful and unusual views.

The original sentence omits the necessary verb; 'really into' requires a form of 'be' (I am really into) or a verb like 'enjoy'. This is a sentence structure/verb usage error. Use 'I am really into photography' or 'I really enjoy photography' to make the sentence grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'I am really into' + noun or use a verb such as 'enjoy' for a direct construction.

× Whenever I visit a new place, I tend to take quite a few pictures of the scenery and local surrounding.

✓ Whenever I visit a new place, I tend to take quite a few pictures of the scenery and local surroundings.

The noun 'surroundings' is commonly used in plural form when referring to the area around a place. The error is incorrect noun form/word choice closely related to -ing and plural usage. Use 'surroundings' to indicate the area around a place.

× Photographing plays a very significant role.

✓ Photography plays a very significant role.

'Photographing' is a gerund but sounds awkward here; 'photography' is the more natural noun to refer to the activity or field. This is a sentence structure/word choice issue. Use 'photography' for clarity and naturalness.

× I will definitely go for rural views.

✓ I would definitely go for rural views.

In this conversational preference question, the conditional 'would' or present simple 'prefer' is more appropriate than the future 'will'. Using 'will' implies a firm future action rather than a preference. Use 'would' to express preference or hypothetical choice.

× I find the countryside for more refreshing as compared to rural areas, particularly because of its sensory open spaces and natural landscapes.

✓ I find the countryside more refreshing compared to urban areas, particularly because of its wide open spaces and natural landscapes.

Several issues: 'for more refreshing' is incorrect — use 'more refreshing' without 'for'. Also 'as compared to rural areas' is wrong because the contrast intended is with urban areas, not rural. 'Sensory open spaces' is awkward; 'wide open spaces' is the normal expression. This is incorrect preposition and word choice combined. Correct comparison and phrasing.

× Although urban area can have impressive architecture and modern skylines.

✓ Although urban areas can have impressive architecture and modern skylines.

'Urban area' should be plural to match the general statement; use 'areas' or 'an urban area can'. This is a subject-verb agreement / number error. Use plural 'areas' to generalize.

× I would probably prefer you in other countries, mainly because I'm fancy cated by different landscapes, architecture and culture.

✓ I would probably prefer other countries, mainly because I'm fascinated by different landscapes, architecture, and cultures.

Multiple errors: 'prefer you in other countries' is wrong pronoun use — the speaker likely means 'places' or 'other countries'. 'Fancy cated' is incorrect and should be 'fascinated'. Also list items should use plural 'cultures'. These are incorrect pronoun and word-choice errors. Use 'prefer other countries' and 'fascinated'.

× Seeing something completely unfamiliar can be really enriching experience.

✓ Seeing something completely unfamiliar can be a really enriching experience.

Missing article 'a' before 'really enriching experience'. This is a sentence structure/article error. Insert 'a' for correct English.