Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct grammar and word choice, reduce redundancy, and make sentences more natural and concise. Use a clear topic sentence, a linking phrase, and a specific detail or example. Fix verb forms (e.g., 'taking picture' → 'taking pictures'; 'prevents' → 'preserve') and awkward words like 'explicitly' and 'series.'

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to new places. For example, on a recent trip to the coast I photographed the cliffs at sunrise, which helps me remember the light and colours. I usually focus on landscapes and interesting details to tell a story in my photos.

Sugestão: Clarify the preference with a direct topic sentence and avoid repetition ('peaceful' used twice). Give a specific reason or example and use a linking word to connect ideas. Replace vague phrase 'would like to visit preferable views.'

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside feels more peaceful and refreshing. For instance, the green fields and wide open spaces allow me to relax and enjoy nature, whereas cities often feel crowded and noisy.

Sugestão: Improve clarity and grammar. Begin with a clear preference (e.g., 'I prefer views in other countries') and correct modal/phrasing ('should leave any other countries' is incorrect). Use linking words ('however', 'although') and give a specific example of what you like abroad and at home. Fix verb forms ('particularly interested' → 'I am particularly interested').

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer completely different landscapes and ways of life. For example, I enjoy seeing foreign agricultural terraces and coastal villages that I don't have at home. However, my country also has diverse scenery, such as mountains and historic towns, so I like both for different reasons.

× I enjoy taking picture of different views, particularly when I am travelling or visiting a new place.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views, particularly when I am travelling or visiting a new place.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the speaker refers to multiple photos in general. Use plural when speaking about more than one item or an uncountable general activity. Suggestion: use 'pictures' for multiple photos or 'a picture' if referring to one specific photo.

× I'm explicitly fond of capturing new series because photographs allow me to prevents memorable moment and look back on them later.

✓ I'm particularly fond of capturing new series because photographs allow me to preserve memorable moments and look back on them later.

'Explicitly' is semantically odd here; 'particularly' fits better. 'Prevents' is incorrect: after modal-like construction 'allow me to' the base verb form is used, so use 'preserve' (or 'save'). Also 'memorable moment' should be plural 'memorable moments' to match general reference. Suggestion: use 'allow me to preserve memorable moments'.

× I would like to visit preferable views.

✓ I would like to visit preferred views.

'Preferable' is an adjective meaning 'more desirable' and is not typically used to describe something one wishes to visit; 'preferred' (adjective) or 'more preferable' (comparative) fits better. In this context 'preferred views' or 'places I prefer' is natural. Suggestion: use 'preferred views' or rephrase to 'I would like to visit places I prefer.'

× I find the countryside much more peaceful and refreshing, mainly because of the greenery, open spaces and peaceful landscapes.

✓ I find the countryside much more peaceful and refreshing, mainly because of the greenery, open spaces and calm landscapes.

The word 'peaceful' is repeated ('peaceful and peaceful landscapes'), which is stylistically awkward. Replace the second occurrence with a synonym such as 'calm' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: vary adjectives to improve style.

× I probably should leave any other countries because they offer a completely different experience and particularly interested in seeing unfamiliar landscapes and agriculture.

✓ I would probably like to visit other countries because they offer a completely different experience, and I am particularly interested in seeing unfamiliar landscapes and agriculture.

'Should leave any other countries' is incorrect for expressing desire; use 'would probably like to visit other countries'. Also the second clause lacks a subject and verb: 'particularly interested' needs 'I am' before it. Suggestion: use 'I would probably like to visit other countries' and 'I am particularly interested'.