Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and correct small grammatical errors, be more specific and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using linking words. Keep it under five sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., landmarks, landscapes, architecture).

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views, especially when I travel to a new place. For example, I often capture natural landscapes like mountains or coastal sunsets and the local architecture such as old churches or modern skyscrapers. I keep these photos because they vividly remind me of the atmosphere and memories from each trip.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and add a linking phrase to make the response more coherent. Provide one specific scene or reason to illustrate why rural views appeal to you, and vary vocabulary (e.g., tranquil, pastoral, expansive).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they tend to be more tranquil and immersed in nature. For instance, I especially enjoy wide green fields dotted with wildflowers and quiet tree-lined lanes, which feel much more relaxing than noisy city streets.

Sugestão: Clarify and streamline the answer to sound more confident and organized. Use a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example and a brief contrast with your own country. Avoid repeating similar ideas and keep it within five sentences.

Exemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because they offer diverse landscapes and new cultural experiences. For example, I’d love to photograph Canada’s rugged coastlines and Australia’s red desert vistas, which are very different from what I see at home. That said, my country also has many scenic spots I still want to explore.

× I usually take photos of nature, beautiful building or interesting states.

✓ I usually take photos of nature, beautiful buildings, or interesting places.

The noun forms are incorrect: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match the general category, and 'states' is likely the wrong word for 'places' or 'scenes'. Use parallel noun forms separated by commas and include the conjunction 'or'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and correct nouns to convey intended meaning.

× I like keeping these pictures because they remind me of the place I have visited.

✓ I like keeping these pictures because they remind me of the places I have visited.

Number agreement: 'the place' conflicts with plural 'these pictures' and with general meaning. Use plural 'places' to match 'these pictures'. The present perfect 'have visited' is acceptable for past experiences that relate to the present. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches context.

× I prefer views in rural areas because they are usually peaceful and surrounding by nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are usually peaceful and surrounded by nature.

Incorrect participle form and preposition: 'surrounding by' is wrong. The correct passive participle 'surrounded by' should be used to indicate that nature surrounds rural areas. Suggestion: use 'surrounded by' for passive meaning.

× I really enjoy seeing greenfields, trees and open spaces.

✓ I really enjoy seeing green fields, trees, and open spaces.

Compound noun spelling and punctuation: 'greenfields' is more naturally written as two words 'green fields'. Add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity (Oxford comma optional). Suggestion: separate 'green fields' and punctuate lists consistently.