Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and conciseness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word to make the answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, particularly when I travel to new places. For example, when I visited Kyoto last year, I photographed temple gardens at sunrise, which helps me remember the atmosphere and light from that morning.

Sugestão: Make the response more fluent and precise. Start with a direct topic sentence, remove filler phrases (e.g., 'kind of like'), and use a linking phrase to add one specific reason or example about urban features you like to photograph.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and enjoy vibrant street scenes. For instance, I often photograph neon signs and busy markets at night, which convey the energy and atmosphere of urban life.

Sugestão: Clarify and tighten the answer. Use a concise topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details, linked logically. Correct minor phrasing issues ('I prefer views in other countries because I grew up in Thailand, which is warm, so I like photographing snowy landscapes').

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially snowy ones, because I grew up in warm Thailand. For example, I would love to photograph the glaciers in Iceland or the alpine villages in Switzerland to capture dramatic winter light and snowy textures.

× I feel like capture different moments in different views are really important because whenever you look back, it takes you back to the time where you were there and it's really special.

✓ I feel like capturing different moments in different views is really important because whenever you look back, it takes you back to the time when you were there and it's really special.

The phrase 'feel like' should be followed by a verb in -ing form (gerund), so 'capture' should be 'capturing'. Also the clause 'capture different moments ... are' had a subject-verb agreement issue because the gerund phrase is singular, so use 'is' not 'are'. Use 'when' rather than 'where' for referring to time. Suggestion: after 'feel like' use 'verb+ing' and ensure singular verb for the gerund phrase; use 'when' for time references.

× I do prefer views in urban areas because I grew up in kind of like a city life, so I do like something that is flashy or has a lot of nightlife and I really want to capture something like that more than like the trees or environment more.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I grew up with city life, so I like places that are flashy or have a lot of nightlife, and I want to capture those more than trees or natural environments.

Use concise conjunctions and avoid redundant words ('do prefer' unnecessary; 'kind of like' and duplicate 'more' are informal/redundant). 'Grew up in kind of like a city life' is incorrect; use 'grew up with city life' or 'in a city'. 'Something that is flashy or has' should agree with plural 'places' and use 'have' rather than 'has'. Suggestion: remove filler words, ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid repeating comparative markers.

× I do prefer views in other countries because I grew up in Thailand and there are a lot of buildings, but I like snowy or winter countries, so I do prefer countries that are cold, for example Iceland or Switzerland, so that I can capture a lot of snow pictures.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I grew up in Thailand where there are a lot of buildings, but I like snowy, winter countries, such as Iceland or Switzerland, so I can capture many snowy pictures.

Reduce unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in 'do prefer'; 'where' is better than 'and' to link 'Thailand' with 'there are a lot of buildings.' Use adjective order 'snowy, winter countries' or simply 'winter countries.' 'So that I can' is acceptable but can be simplified to 'so I can.' Use 'many' or 'lots of' instead of 'a lot of' with 'pictures.' Suggestion: remove redundant 'do', use correct relative words, and choose clearer quantifiers.