Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and remove redundancy. For example, say when you take photos, why you enjoy it and what memories they bring.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I travel. For example, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes, and later when I look at these photos I remember the places and the good times I had with friends and family.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and remove unclear phrases. Mention particular features you like in rural views.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they have natural scenery and mountains. For example, I like wide fields, forests and mountain ranges, which feel peaceful and are great for photography.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give specific supporting details and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, such as) and correct phrasing about Nepal's scenery and atmosphere.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because it has diverse natural scenery. For example, the Himalayas, terraced fields and quiet mountain villages offer spectacular photo opportunities and a peaceful atmosphere.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views especially when I travel I click a random pictures of the view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. I click random pictures of the view.

Grammar problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors). The original has 'a random pictures' which mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' to match plural or change to 'a random picture'. Also run-on sentence: two independent clauses need separation with a period or a conjunction. Suggestion: use a comma before 'especially' and separate the clauses into two sentences or connect with 'and'. Please say 'click random pictures' or 'take a random picture' depending on intended meaning.

× When future I watch the photos.

✓ In the future, I will look at the photos.

Grammar problem types: 7 (Future tense issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'When future I watch the photos' is not a correct future-time clause. Use 'In the future' or 'When I am in the future' is incorrect. For planned future viewing, use 'I will look at' or 'I will watch' (for videos). Suggestion: use 'In the future, I will look at the photos' or 'Later, I will look at the photos'.

× I remember the past days with this thing of the pictures that I travel with my friends family.

✓ I remember the past days when I traveled with my friends and family by looking at these pictures.

Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns), 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'I remember the past days with this thing of the pictures' is ungrammatical. Use a correct relative/time clause: 'when I traveled with my friends and family'. Also use past tense 'traveled' and the preposition 'by looking at these pictures' to express how memories are recalled. Suggestion: simplify to 'I remember past days when I traveled with my friends and family by looking at these pictures.'

× I prefer views in rural areas because they there were there are natural places, the mountains.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there are natural places, like mountains.

Grammar problem types: 6 (Present tense issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 16 (Incorrect conjunction use). The original repeats 'they there were there are' which is incorrect and confusing. For a general preference use present simple 'there are'. Also restructure to 'like mountains' to give an example. Suggestion: avoid repeating verbs and keep present simple for general facts.

× Here I'm going to do it.

✓ (This sentence is unclear; possible correction:)'I'm going to take pictures here.'

Grammar problem types: 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'Here I'm going to do it' is vague; in context the student likely means 'I'm going to take pictures here.' Suggestion: state the action and object clearly: 'I'm going to take pictures here.'

× I prefer views in my own country in Nepal.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, Nepal.

Grammar problem types: 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The phrase 'in my own country in Nepal' is redundant. Use apposition with a comma: 'my own country, Nepal.' Suggestion: say 'I prefer views in my own country, Nepal.'

× Nepal is the natural fully natural resources country.

✓ Nepal is a country with abundant natural resources.

Grammar problem types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 22 (Article errors). 'The natural fully natural resources country' is ungrammatical adjective order and article misuse. Correct form: 'a country with abundant natural resources' or 'a country rich in natural resources.' Suggestion: use 'a country with abundant natural resources.'

× In the mountains there are especially many views that enjoy the people to take the pictures also and they quite peace environment also.

✓ In the mountains there are many beautiful views that people especially enjoy photographing, and the environment is quite peaceful.

Grammar problem types: 18 (Incorrect order of adjectives), 8 (Verb + -ing form), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 26 (Sentence structure errors). Original word order is incorrect ('views that enjoy the people to take the pictures') and missing gerund after 'enjoy' for the verb form. Use 'people enjoy photographing' or 'enjoy taking pictures'. Also 'quite peace environment' should be 'quite peaceful environment' or 'the environment is quite peaceful.' Suggestion: reorder adjectives and use gerund after 'enjoy'.