Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I use my camera to capture beautiful scenes so I can remember special moments, because memories can fade over time. For example, I photograph sunsets and city skylines so I can look back at them later.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer then support it with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repeating the same reason twice. Mention one or two concrete details to strengthen the response.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas. Mainly because public transport is convenient and I often need to travel to school or work, so city views are more accessible. For instance, I can easily photograph parks, modern architecture and busy streets without long journeys.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a specific reason with better vocabulary and fewer fillers. Use correct country/place names and provide one concrete example or comparison.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new and unique sights. For example, I would love to see landmarks in Britain like Big Ben and Tower Bridge, which are very different from the places in my hometown and would give me fresh photographic opportunities.

× Yeah, I like use my camera to record the beautiful views, because I think this is an unforgettable memory and I must record it.

✓ Yeah, I like using my camera to record the beautiful views, because I think they are unforgettable memories and I must record them.

The verb 'like' is followed by a gerund when expressing enjoyment of an activity (Grammar Problem Type 8: Verb + -ing form). Also 'this is an unforgettable memory' is singular while referring to multiple views; change to plural 'they are unforgettable memories' to match meaning (Grammar Problem Type 1: Singular and plural issue). Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'memories' (Grammar Problem Type 12: Incorrect use of pronouns). Improve wording consistency by using plural forms. Suggestion: Use 'like doing' + plural agreement when referring to multiple items.

× I I'm afraid I I will forgot this memory and before view in the future, so I'd like to take photos.

✓ I'm afraid I will forget these memories and earlier views in the future, so I'd like to take photos.

'Will forgot' is incorrect because 'forgot' is the simple past; after 'will' the base form 'forget' must be used (Grammar Problem Type 5: Past tense issue). Also repetition 'I I' is a speech disfluency; remove duplicates. 'This memory and before view' is unclear; use plural 'these memories and earlier views' for clarity and agreement (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: Use 'will' + base verb (forget) and choose clear plural references.

× I think I'll say the urban areas because the major reason is the transportation, because I need to go to school.

✓ I think I'll choose urban areas because the main reason is transportation; I need to go to school.

'I'll say the urban areas' is awkward; 'choose' better matches the decision context. 'The transportation' with 'the' is unnecessary when speaking generally; use 'transportation' (Grammar Problem Type 17: Incorrect use of the definite article). Also streamline phrasing for clarity (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: Use 'choose' for preferences and omit 'the' before general nouns like 'transportation'.

× So the transportation is very important and the rural areas is far from a school, so I choose the urban areas.

✓ Transportation is very important, and rural areas are far from schools, so I choose urban areas.

'The rural areas is' has subject-verb disagreement: 'areas' is plural and needs 'are' (Grammar Problem Type 27: Subject-verb agreement). 'A school' is too specific; use plural 'schools' or no article when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 22: Article errors). Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'transportation' and 'urban areas' for natural phrasing (Grammar Problem Type 17). Suggestion: Match plural nouns with plural verbs and use general nouns without articles.

× I prefer the view in other countries because, uh, it's very attractive for me.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they are very attractive to me.

'The view in other countries' is unnatural; use plural 'views' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Attractive for me' should be 'attractive to me' (Grammar Problem Type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Also use 'they are' to agree with plural 'views' (Grammar Problem Type 27). Suggestion: Use 'attractive to me' and match noun number.

× Uh, for example, I really want to go to British to see the Big Ben and, uh, London Bridge.

✓ For example, I really want to go to Britain to see Big Ben and London Bridge.

Use 'Britain' (country name) rather than adjective 'British' when saying where you want to go (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'Go to British' is incorrect. Also 'the Big Ben' is unnecessary; 'Big Ben' is used without 'the' (Grammar Problem Type 17 and 22: Article errors). 'London Bridge' does not need an article either. Suggestion: Use correct country names and omit articles before well-known landmark names.