Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response clearer and more natural by starting with a direct topic sentence, avoiding repetition, fixing grammar, and providing one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'also' or 'because') to connect ideas and keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing nature because I find landscapes and plants very calming, and I often upload my best shots to my online photography account. For example, last month I posted a series of sunrise photos that got many positive comments.

Sugestão: Correct contradictions and grammatical errors, and give clear specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure coherence by using linking words such as 'because' and 'for example.' Keep it to 2–4 sentences with concrete examples of urban features you like to photograph.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy photographing architecture and city life. For example, I like capturing modern skyscrapers, clean streets, and public transport scenes because they show how a city functions and look striking in photos.

Sugestão: Avoid vague and awkward phrasing. State your preference directly, give specific reasons and one example comparison, and correct grammar (e.g., 'better' instead of 'much lower'). Stay concise and use linking words like 'however' or 'for example' to improve clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in other countries because I find their architecture and landscapes more varied. For example, European cities often have historic buildings and well-preserved streets that make interesting photos, whereas I find familiar scenes at home less varied.

× Yes, of course Lee, I would like to take pictures of different views as I am always keen of taking pictures and I like to upload them on Internet as well.

✓ Yes, of course Lee, I would like to take pictures of different views because I am always keen on taking pictures and I like to upload them on the Internet as well.

Use 'keen on' not 'keen of' and include the appropriate conjunction 'because' for reason; use the article 'the' with 'Internet'. Suggestion: replace 'keen of' with 'keen on' and add 'the' before 'Internet'.

× So I have my all.

✓ So I have them all.

The original word order and pronoun use is incorrect. Use the object pronoun 'them' and place 'all' after it: 'I have them all.'

× I also have my official account of different nature view picture.

✓ I also have an official account for different nature-view pictures.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel sound; use 'for' to indicate purpose; hyphenate 'nature-view' or use 'nature view' and plural 'pictures' to match meaning. Suggestion: 'an official account for nature-view pictures.'

× So that's the reason I would like to take the nature view pictures in my mobile or a camera.

✓ So that's the reason I would like to take nature-view pictures with my mobile or with a camera.

Use 'with' to indicate the instrument (mobile or camera). 'In my mobile' is incorrect. Also use 'nature-view pictures' or 'nature pictures' and keep articles consistent.

× Yes, I would prefer views in urban areas, uh, because there is much more development as compared to the urban areas.

✓ Yes, I would prefer views in urban areas, uh, because there is much more development compared to rural areas.

Sentence repeated 'urban areas' incorrectly; compare urban to rural. Also 'there is much more development' is acceptable but ensure correct comparison object. Suggestion: replace second 'urban areas' with 'rural areas'.

× Uh, the building and the infrastructure, the roads are much cleaner and safer than as compared to the unreasoned areas.

✓ Uh, the buildings, the infrastructure and the roads are much cleaner and safer than in rural areas.

Use plural 'buildings' and parallel structure; 'than as compared to' is redundant—use 'than in' or 'compared to'. 'Unreasoned areas' is wrong word choice; use 'rural areas'.

× So I would like to take the photographs and pictures in the urban areas.

✓ So I would like to take photographs in urban areas.

'Photographs and pictures' is redundant; use one noun. 'In urban areas' is fine. Simplify for clarity.

× As compared to other countries, the views of our countries are much lower and not as much as good for photographs as compared to the other Europeans or African countries.

✓ Compared to other countries, the views in our country are not as good for photographs as those in many European or African countries.

Multiple comparison errors: use 'compared to' at start, singular 'our country' fits context, 'not as good' is correct comparative form, and compare 'the views in our country' with 'those in other countries' for clarity. Avoid 'much lower' when describing quality of views.

× So I would like to take my pictures out of country so as because there is much more infrastructure and the buildings are.

✓ So I would like to take my pictures abroad because there is much more infrastructure and larger buildings there.

Use 'abroad' or 'in other countries' instead of 'out of country'; 'so as because' is redundant—use 'because'. Finish the clause: 'larger buildings there.' Use 'there' to refer to other countries.