Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors; open with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid informal contractions/slang (e.g., "gonna") and plural mistakes ("the kind of people" should be "the kind of person"). Keep to under five sentences and finish cleanly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I usually take one or two photos of a landscape because later I like to review the day’s highlights when I return to the hotel. Also, photographs help me remember details I might otherwise forget.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence and support it with specific, well-linked reasons. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "natural landscapes", "greenery", "peaceful") and a linking word such as "because" or "because of" to connect reasons. Limit to three sentences maximum.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are less crowded and offer natural landscapes. For instance, I enjoy wide green fields and quiet trails, which feel more peaceful than busy city streets.

Sugestão: Answer directly and concisely: if you have not traveled abroad, state that briefly, then offer a clear opinion or expectation about foreign views (e.g., curious, open) and give a specific reason. Correct grammar ("I haven't had the chance", "we can do tourism" is awkward—use "there are many places to visit"). Keep to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I haven't had the chance to travel abroad, so I can only compare views in my own country for now. Nevertheless, I'm open to seeing views in other countries because I expect they would offer different architectural styles and cultural landscapes that I haven't experienced yet.

× Yes, I do to a certain extent.

✓ Yes, I do, to a certain extent.

A comma is needed after 'do' to set off the introductory phrase 'to a certain extent'. This is punctuation rather than a grammatical pronoun error; however the intended meaning uses the auxiliary 'do' correctly. Suggestion: include the comma for clarity: 'Yes, I do, to a certain extent.'

× I'm not typically the kind of people who are gonna stay on their phones taking multiple pictures for every landscape when we go to a new place.

✓ I'm not typically the kind of person who is going to stay on their phone taking multiple pictures of every landscape when we go to a new place.

Error: singular/plural and informal contraction. 'Kind' takes singular 'person' not plural 'people' (Grammar problem type 1). Also 'gonna' is informal; use 'going to'. 'Phone' should be singular to match 'person', and 'of every landscape' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'person', 'is going to', and 'phone'.

× But I do take picture, I would say.

✓ But I do take pictures, I would say.

Error: singular/plural. 'Take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' when speaking generally (Grammar problem type 1). Suggestion: use plural 'pictures' for habitual actions.

× And I enjoy doing that because after when we are back home or to the hotel, I enjoy looking back to what we've done during that day and I'm already.

✓ And I enjoy doing that because when we are back home or at the hotel, I enjoy looking back at what we've done during the day.

Multiple issues: awkward adverb placement and preposition choice. Remove 'after' and use 'when' to introduce the time clause; use 'at the hotel' not 'to the hotel' (Grammar problem type 11). Use 'looking back at' not 'looking back to' (Grammar problem type 11). The clause 'and I'm already' is incomplete and should be removed (Grammar problem type 23). Suggestion: simplify to 'when we are back home or at the hotel, I enjoy looking back at what we've done during the day.'

× I definitely will go with the rural area because I just feel like it's less crowded, you can see neutral landscapes, there are more greeneries, and it's overall more appeasing.

✓ I would definitely choose rural areas because I feel they are less crowded, you can see natural landscapes, there is more greenery, and overall they are more appealing.

Errors: 'will go with' is awkward; use 'would choose' or 'prefer' for preference (Grammar problem type 7). 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general preference (Grammar problem type 1). 'Neutral landscapes' is incorrect word choice; 'natural landscapes' is intended (adjective error, type 13). 'More greeneries' is uncountable 'greenery' not 'greeneries' (Grammar problem type 1/13). 'More appeasing' is incorrect; use 'more appealing' (type 13). Suggestion: use 'choose' or 'prefer', 'natural landscapes', 'more greenery', and 'more appealing.'

× I wouldn't be able to answer this specific question as I still didn't have the chance to go abroad and see other cities, new landscapes.

✓ I can't answer this specific question because I haven't had the chance to go abroad and see other cities and new landscapes.

Tense and modal mismatch: 'wouldn't be able to' suggests conditional but context requires present inability (Grammar problem type 4). 'Still didn't have' mixes past with present context; use present perfect 'haven't had' to indicate experience up to now (Grammar problem type 5/6). Also use 'because' for reason and include 'and' between items. Suggestion: use 'I can't' and 'I haven't had the chance.'

× So we'll stick with the experiences I've had in my country and I'm happy with that.

✓ So I'll stick with the experiences I've had in my country, and I'm happy with that.

Pronoun/tense mismatch: 'we'll stick' (we will) conflicts with previous 'I' perspective; use 'I'll stick' to match 'I' (Grammar problem type 26). Keep present perfect 'I've had' which is correct. Suggestion: maintain consistent subject 'I' throughout.

× I feel like we have a lot of places to go do tourism.

✓ I feel like we have a lot of places to visit for tourism.

Incorrect verb phrase and preposition: 'go do tourism' is unidiomatic. Use 'places to visit' and 'for tourism' or 'for sightseeing' (Grammar problem type 11). Suggestion: say 'places to visit for tourism' or 'places to go sightseeing.'