Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear, use correct tense, avoid repetition, and give concise supporting details. Start with a direct topic sentence (present tense), then add 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Fix vocabulary (e.g., 'views' not 'viewers') and remove repeated words.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me relax. For example, I often photograph sunsets and rivers, and when I review those photos I feel calm and refreshed.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain the preference with specific comparisons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and avoid incorrect words ('bike'). Give one or two concrete examples to illustrate differences between urban and rural views.

Exemplo: I like both urban and rural views, but I prefer rural scenery because it is quieter and greener. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and farms, whereas city views offer interesting architecture and busy streets.

Sugestão: Be grammatically correct and clear. State your preference directly, explain why with specific reasons (e.g., familiarity, cost, accessibility), and avoid unclear phrases. Use correct plural forms and simple linking words like 'because' or 'since.'

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the places and it is cheaper to travel locally. For example, I often visit nearby beaches and mountains, which are easy to reach and always beautiful.

× I really enjoyed taking pictures of different views since I really like pretty viewers and I enjoy and it made me feel more relaxed when seeing a pretty pretty views.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like pretty views, and it makes me feel relaxed when I see beautiful views.

Errors: inconsistent tense (used past 'enjoyed' but context asks about a general preference — use present 'enjoy'); incorrect noun 'viewers' instead of 'views'; repetition and extra conjunctions ('and I enjoy and'); plurality with 'pretty pretty views' is awkward and adjective choice inconsistent. Suggestion: Use present tense for habitual preferences, use the noun 'views', remove redundant words, and use 'beautiful' or 'pretty' once. Maintain subject-verb agreement ('it makes'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× I like both views since they give very unique views and different bike.

✓ I like both urban and rural views because they each offer unique sights and different experiences.

Errors: awkward repetition of 'views' and wrong noun 'bike' (likely intended 'vibe' or 'experience'). 'Very unique' is redundant; 'unique' does not need 'very'. Suggestion: Specify 'urban and rural', replace repeated words with synonyms ('sights', 'experiences'), and correct 'bike' to 'vibe' or 'experience'. This fixes sentence structure and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:26

× For me, since I didn't try to go in another countries, I preferred the views here in our country since so it is free day of the abuse and of a different this kind.

✓ I have not tried going to other countries, so I prefer the views here in my country.

Errors: incorrect past tense 'didn't try to go in' (use present perfect 'have not tried going to' for experience up to now), wrong plural noun 'another countries' (should be 'other countries'), incorrect tense 'preferred' should be present 'prefer' for current preference, and the clause 'since so it is free day of the abuse and of a different this kind' is ungrammatical and unclear. Suggestion: Use present perfect for life experiences, use 'other countries', use 'prefer' for current preference, and remove unclear fragment or replace with clear reason if intended. Grammar problem type ID:5