Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and a specific example. To improve, shorten slightly to avoid redundancy (e.g., remove repeated reason phrases), vary vocabulary (use synonyms for 'enjoy' and 'relaxed'), and include one linking word to connect ideas smoothly. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes when I walk home from work, since capturing the changing colors and atmosphere makes me feel calm and refreshed.

Sugestão: Your answer gives reasons for preference but has several issues: repetition, hesitations, grammatical errors, and an unfinished final phrase. To improve, remove hesitations (‘umm’), correct grammar (e.g., 'I enjoy photographing'), avoid repeating words, and finish the contrast sentence with a clear point using a linking word like 'however' or 'but'. Limit to 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I grew up there and enjoy photographing sunsets, beaches and natural landscapes when I hike with friends. However, I also appreciate urban views for their striking architecture and lively street scenes, which offer different photo opportunities.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and contains personal preference plus contrast. Issues: a repeated word ('seeing'), a slight awkward phrase ('scenery in other countries'), and some redundancy across sentences. To improve, remove repetition, tighten phrasing, and use one linking word to contrast (e.g., 'however'). Keep concise with 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy beautiful views everywhere, but I prefer scenery in other countries because they often offer landscapes and cultures I don’t see at home. However, I still stop to admire any striking local views when I find them.

× I prefer rural areas because I was born there and I and enjoy photo photographing sunsets, beaches and natural landscapes when I go hiking with my friends.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born there and I enjoy photographing sunsets, beaches, and natural landscapes when I go hiking with my friends.

The sentence contains a duplicated pronoun 'I and' which is incorrect; this is an incorrect use of pronouns and word order. Remove the extra 'and' and streamline the verb phrase to 'enjoy photographing' for correct pronoun use and fluency. Also remove the duplicated word 'photo' before 'photographing' and add a comma in a list for clarity.

× I prefer rural areas because I was born there and I and enjoy photo photographing sunsets, beaches and natural landscapes when I go hiking with my friends.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born there and I enjoy photographing sunsets, beaches, and natural landscapes when I go hiking with my friends.

The verb 'photograph' should be in the -ing form 'photographing' after the verb 'enjoy'. Using 'photo photographing' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'enjoy photographing' to follow the correct verb + -ing pattern.

× However, I also like urban areas for their architecture and vibrant St. umm scenes which are great for taking different kind of.

✓ However, I also like urban areas for their architecture and vibrant streets, which are great for taking different kinds of photos.

This sentence has disfluencies ('St. umm') and an incomplete ending ('different kind of.'). Restructure to 'vibrant streets' and complete the phrase with 'different kinds of photos'. Also add a comma before the relative clause for clarity.

× I enjoy beautiful views everywhere, but I think I prefer seeing seeing scenery in other countries because it offers different landscapes and cultures I don't experience at home.

✓ I enjoy beautiful views everywhere, but I think I prefer seeing scenery in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures I don't experience at home.

There is an accidental repetition 'seeing seeing'. Remove the duplicate. Also the plural subject 'countries' requires the plural verb/pronoun 'they offer' rather than 'it offers' to agree in number.

× I enjoy beautiful views everywhere, but I think I prefer seeing seeing scenery in other countries because it offers different landscapes and cultures I don't experience at home.

✓ I enjoy beautiful views everywhere, but I think I prefer seeing scenery in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures I don't experience at home.

The original uses 'countries' (plural) with 'it offers' (singular), causing subject-verb disagreement. Change 'it offers' to 'they offer' to match the plural noun 'countries'.