Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答总体可以理解，但存在语法、用词和表达重复问题。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答并给出原因，例如“I enjoy taking photos because…”；2) 修正文法错误，例如将“broadcasting and television academic”改为“broadcasting and television”或“broadcasting and television studies”，将“photograph is one of our requested course”改为“photography is a required course”；3) 避免冗长重复，把理由具体化且控制在3-4句话内；4) 使用连接词提高连贯性，如“because”、“so”或“which”。

Exemplo: I enjoy taking photos because I’m studying broadcasting and television, and photography is a required course in my program. Taking pictures helps me preserve memories of important moments, and I often try different angles and lighting to make images more memorable.

Sugestão: 答案有明确立场，但语法和词汇使用不准确，且细节模糊。建议：1) 修正语法（例如‘I have lived in the city since childhood’）；2) 用更恰当的词汇描述（例如‘architecture’替代‘buildings as the best basic of photograph’）；3) 提供具体细节或例子说明为什么喜欢城市景观；4) 控制句子数量并使用连接词（for example, because, such as）。

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and I appreciate its architecture and vibrant street life. For example, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers and historic facades, and I like how the contrast of light and shadow creates interesting compositions.

Sugestão: 回答没有正面回答问题（混淆了问题关于“本国或其他国家”与“城市或乡村”），且重复之前的内容。建议：1) 直接回答“本国还是其他国家”，例如‘I prefer views in other countries’或‘I prefer views in my own country’；2) 给出明确理由并加入比较（e.g. cultural differences, architectural styles）；3) 避免重复前一题内容，提供新信息或具体例子；4) 注意语法和词汇准确性。

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because different cultures often have unique architectural styles and landscapes. For instance, I find European city centers fascinating for their historic buildings, while Asian cities offer a lively mix of modern and traditional elements that inspire my photography.

× I'm a student majoring in broadcasting and television academic, so photograph is one of our requested course and I think taking pictures can bring out my memories of the past, so I really enjoy it.

✓ I'm a student majoring in broadcasting and television. Photography is one of our required courses, and I think taking pictures brings back my memories, so I really enjoy it.

问题属句子结构与用词不当：原句“broadcasting and television academic”结构不自然，应为“broadcasting and television”或“broadcasting and television studies”；“photograph”用词错误，名词形式应为“photography”；“requested course”搭配不当，应为“required course”；句中重复使用“so”导致冗长，应用逗号和连词连接；“bring out my memories of the past”表达不地道，建议用“bring back my memories”。建议多使用固定搭配（major in, required course, bring back memories）并简化句子结构。

× I live in urban since I was a child and I think urban views are always beautiful and elegant.

✓ I have lived in the city since I was a child, and I think urban views are always beautiful and elegant.

问题属冠词与名词搭配及时态：原句中“in urban”不正确，英语中应说“in the city”或“in an urban area”；表示从过去持续到现在应使用现在完成时“have lived”；保持句子连贯需在并列句加逗号和连词。建议记住地点表达的常用搭配和现在完成时的用法（since用于现在完成时）。

× I regard buildings as the best basic of photograph and I enjoy these trees flower.

✓ I regard buildings as the best basis for photography, and I enjoy the trees and flowers.

问题属冠词与名词搭配及词汇选择：原句“the best basic of photograph”结构错误，应为“the best basis for photography”；“photograph”应改为不可数名词“photography”；“these trees flower”语序和复数形式有误，正确应为“the trees and flowers”或“trees and flowers”。建议学习名词搭配（basis for, photography）以及并列名词的正确表达。

× I prefer urban areas. I live in urban since I was a child and I think urban views are always beautiful and elegant. I regard buildings as the best basic of photograph and I enjoy these trees flower.

✓ I prefer urban areas. I have lived in the city since I was a child, and I think urban views are always beautiful and elegant. I regard buildings as the best basis for photography, and I enjoy the trees and flowers.

此段包含多处冠词、时态与搭配错误：1) “in urban”应为“in the city”或“in an urban area”；2) 从过去到现在持续应使用现在完成时“have lived”；3) “basic of photograph”应为“basis for photography”；4) “these trees flower”应分为“trees and flowers”。建议复习冠词用法（a/an/the）、现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）、以及常见搭配（basis for, photography, trees and flowers）。