Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and accurate: correct vocabulary mistakes (videos → views), remove filler words (like, very) and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of landscapes and unusual street scenes because I find unusual or striking details fascinating.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence, give specific reasons and one comparison using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect structures (e.g., 'of not lived').

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I grew up in the countryside and enjoy open fields and traditional scenery. However, urban areas can also be attractive for their historic buildings and lively streets.

Sugestão: Be specific and grammatical: answer directly (own country or other countries), give a clear reason and one example. Avoid repetition and vague statements like 'way way pretty.'

Exemplo: I tend to prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I like Wales for its rugged coastlines and mountains, which feel quite different from the scenery where I live in India.

× Yes, I indeed like taking pictures of different videos because like when I find some pretty weird stuff very fascinating for me, so I love taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because when I find something pretty or a little strange, I find it very fascinating, so I love taking pictures of different views.

Errors: 'pictures of different videos' uses the wrong noun; 'videos' should be 'views' (word choice). 'I indeed like' is grammatically possible but unnatural; use 'I do like' or simply 'I like'. The clause 'because like when I find some pretty weird stuff very fascinating for me' is ungrammatical and redundant ('like' filler, 'for me' unnecessary) and needs reordering. Suggestion: remove filler 'like', use singular 'something' or 'things', place 'very fascinating' after the subject, and avoid redundant 'for me'. This yields a clear, grammatical sentence matching the present preference context.

× I prefer view in rural areas as compared to urban areas because of myself of not lived in urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas compared with urban areas because I have not lived in urban areas.

Errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' (singular/plural issue). The phrase 'because of myself of not lived in urban areas' is ungrammatical: incorrect pronoun use and wrong verb tense/form. Use 'because I have not lived in urban areas' to explain personal experience; this uses present perfect to indicate life experience. Also replace 'as compared to' with simpler 'compared with' or 'to'.

× So I prefer views more better in rural areas as I think they're very pretty and fascinating.

✓ So I prefer views in rural areas because I think they are very pretty and fascinating.

Errors: 'more better' is incorrect (double comparative) — use either 'better' or 'more' depending on context. 'Prefer views more better' is redundant. Also 'as I think' is informal; 'because I think' is clearer. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer views in rural areas because I think they are very pretty and fascinating.'

× But urban areas are also not bad, they're very vintage.

✓ But urban areas are not bad either; they have a very vintage feel.

Errors: 'also not bad' is acceptable but 'also' placement and punctuation can improve. 'They're very vintage' is awkward because 'vintage' normally modifies 'style' or 'feel'; use 'have a very vintage feel' or 'are very charming and vintage in character.' Suggestion: rephrase for natural collocation and clearer meaning.

× I personally prefer Wales and other countries because the country I live in India, it also has beautiful views but not the views compared to other countries.

✓ I personally prefer Wales and other countries because the country I live in, India, also has beautiful views, but they are not as impressive as the views in some other countries.

Errors: Word order and punctuation: 'the country I live in India' should be 'the country I live in, India,' (apps commas) or 'India, the country I live in,' to avoid confusion. The phrase 'it also has beautiful views but not the views compared to other countries' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use comparative structure 'not as impressive as the views in some other countries.' Also ensure pronoun reference 'they' refers to 'views.'

× Other countries are beautiful and way way pretty.

✓ Other countries are beautiful and much prettier.

Errors: Repetition 'way way' is informal and not suitable for a test response. 'Pretty' in comparative context should be 'prettier.' Use 'much prettier' for emphasis in standard English. Suggestion: avoid doubled words and use proper comparative form.