Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words if adding detail. Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "take pictures of different views", "they capture memories").

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memories. For example, when I visited a lakeside last year, I photographed the sunset and later used those photos to remember the peaceful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer and give a specific reason with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler words like "umm". If you prefer urban areas, explain what exactly attracts you there (architecture, night lights) and give a brief example.

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy photographing interesting architecture and vibrant street life. For instance, I like taking night shots of city streets and tall buildings when I walk alone, as the lights create dramatic contrasts.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly: state your preference then give a brief reason with a specific detail. Avoid repetition and idiomatic errors (e.g., "see another country for myself"). Use linking words like "however" to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know many beautiful places and feel a strong connection to them. However, I would also like to visit other countries someday to see different landscapes and compare them with what I know at home.

× Yeah, I really love to take a picture from a different views because they have to capture the memory that I enjoy in that moment and I really love to capture the moment and it's really passionate.

✓ Yeah, I really love to take pictures of different views because they capture the memories I enjoy in those moments and I really love capturing the moment; it's something I'm really passionate about.

Errors: 'a picture' with 'different views' mismatches singular/plural and requires plural 'pictures' (Grammar problem type ID 1). 'from a different views' uses wrong preposition and article; change to 'of different views' (ID 11 and 22). 'they have to capture' is unnatural/modal; better 'they capture' (ID 6 present tense). 'the memory that I enjoy in that moment' incorrect article and phrasing; use plural 'memories' and 'in those moments' (ID 1 and 6). 'really love to capture the moment' improved to gerund 'really love capturing the moment' to sound natural (ID 8). 'it's really passionate' incorrectly uses adjective; correct phrase 'I'm really passionate about it' (ID 12/13). Suggestions: match singular/plural, use correct prepositions ('of' not 'from'), prefer gerunds after 'love' for general preferences, and use natural collocations like 'passionate about'. Please practice rewriting similar sentences focusing on number agreement and preposition choice.

× I would prefer umm urban areas cause a lot peaceful environment, so I would like to go alone and I would love to capture photos from the urban area at the moment.

✓ I would prefer urban areas because they have a very peaceful environment, so I would like to go alone and I would love to capture photos in the urban area at that time.

Errors: 'cause' is informal; use 'because' (ID 16 informal conjunction). 'a lot peaceful environment' is ungrammatical quantifier/adjective order; use 'a very peaceful environment' (ID 13 and 14). 'capture photos from the urban area' uses wrong preposition 'from'; use 'in the urban area' or simply 'in urban areas' (ID 11). 'at the moment' conflicts with intended meaning; 'at that time' is clearer for future/conditional preference (ID 7). Suggestions: use 'because' in formal responses, choose correct modifiers ('very' before adjective), and use 'in' for location when taking photos.

× I love my country, but if I get a chance to view another country like other country, I would love to go and say it myself.

✓ I love my country, but if I get a chance to visit another country, I would love to go and see it for myself.

Errors: 'view another country like other country' uses wrong verb and repetition; use 'visit another country' (ID 11 preposition/verb choice and ID 26 structure). 'say it myself' is incorrect collocation; intended meaning is 'see it for myself' (ID 13 collocation). Also maintain conditional structure 'if I get a chance... I would love to...' which is acceptable. Suggestions: use 'visit' for traveling to a country, avoid repeating words, and use natural phrases like 'see it for myself'.

× But right now I will say my own country 'cause I love my country and it's very beautiful.

✓ But right now I would choose my own country because I love it and it's very beautiful.

Errors: 'I will say my own country' is awkward for expressing a preference; use 'I would choose' or 'I'd say' (ID 6/7 tense and modality). ''cause' is informal; use 'because' (ID 16). Repeating 'I love my country' is redundant; replace second occurrence with pronoun 'it' (ID 12). Suggestions: use 'would' or 'I'd' for hypothetical/preference statements, avoid colloquial contractions in formal answers, and use pronouns to prevent repetition.