Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and clear but slightly wordy and has minor grammar issues. Make your response more concise and correct small errors (use 'scenery' singular, 'click a picture' is informal—use 'take a photo'). Add one specific example to make it more vivid and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different scenery, not just single objects. For example, when I visit the seaside I often photograph the shoreline and the sunset because the colors and reflections create memorable scenes.

Sugestão: The answer addresses the question but has grammar and word-choice errors and is a bit repetitive. Use singular 'scenery' and correct 'differently environment' to 'different atmosphere' or 'different environment'. Improve coherence by using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also') and provide one specific detail or short explanation.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer traditional old houses and wide natural scenery. For example, I like photographing mountain slopes at dawn since the mist and birds create a peaceful atmosphere that you rarely find in cities.

Sugestão: Reasoning is understandable but the sentence is long and slightly awkward. Use clearer sentence structure, correct tense and phrasing (e.g., 'I haven't visited many countries' is fine, but 'see that with my eyes' should be 'seen them in person'). Add a brief specific reason why your country is appealing for photography.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I haven’t traveled much abroad and there are so many beautiful places at home. For instance, I often explore local national parks where rivers and forests offer varied photo opportunities.

× Absolutely, I love taking pictures of different views or sceneries, not only a specific thing.

✓ Absolutely, I love taking pictures of different views or scenery, not just a single subject.

The noun 'scenery' is uncountable and should not take the plural form 'sceneries'. Also 'not only a specific thing' is awkward; 'not just a single subject' is clearer and uses appropriate adjective/noun forms. Suggestion: use uncountable 'scenery' and more natural phrasing 'single subject.'

× If I find a beauty in it, I would click a picture of it and keep it as a memory in my album.

✓ If I find beauty in it, I will click a picture of it and keep it as a memory in my album.

'Find a beauty' is incorrect; 'beauty' is uncountable here so use 'find beauty in it.' The conditional uses a real future condition, so 'will' is appropriate instead of 'would.' 'Click a picture' is informal but acceptable; 'take a picture' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'find beauty' and 'will' for real conditional; consider 'take a picture.'

× I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because we can see many old houses there with beautiful sceneries all around and mountains, sun, birds and a differently environment we can see.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because we can see many old houses there with beautiful scenery all around, including mountains, the sun, and birds, and we can see a different environment.

Again 'sceneries' should be 'scenery' (uncountable). 'A differently environment' is incorrect: 'differently' is an adverb; the adjective 'different' is required before 'environment.' Also the list needs clearer punctuation and articles: 'the sun' and 'a different environment.' Suggestion: use 'scenery' and adjective 'different,' and restructure the list for clarity.

× Since I haven't visited many countries and didn't get a chance to see that with my eyes, I would prefer taking pictures from my own country which is having thousands of beautiful views.

✓ Since I haven't visited many countries and haven't had a chance to see them with my own eyes, I prefer taking pictures in my own country, which has thousands of beautiful views.

Mixing present perfect 'haven't visited' with simple past 'didn't get' is inconsistent; use present perfect 'haven't had' to match. 'See that with my eyes' is vague; 'see them with my own eyes' refers to countries. Using 'would prefer' suggests hypothetical; 'prefer' is better here. 'Which is having' is incorrect progressive; use simple present 'which has.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present perfect), use plural reference 'them,' and use simple present 'has.'