Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and grammatically correct: use a clear topic sentence, avoid tense errors, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding details. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I'm on vacation. It helps me relax and capture memories from each place I visit. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach so I can remember the colors and atmosphere later.

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and correct repetition and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples with linking words (for example, such as). Avoid repeated phrases and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery to photograph. For example, I like capturing mountain landscapes and rivers, as well as forest trails. These natural views make me feel warm and relaxed.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and add a specific reason or example. Begin with a direct statement, then give a clear supporting detail and a short explanation using linking words (because, for example).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I love its diverse landscapes. For example, the mountain provinces offer dramatic scenery and clear rivers, which are perfect for photography. Because of this variety, I usually choose to explore local spots first.

× It keeps me relaxed and reminisce the times when I go to different places.

✓ It keeps me relaxed and helps me reminisce about the times when I go to different places.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the base verb 'reminisce' after 'keeps me relaxed and' which creates a parallelism and verb form error. Use a verb phrase that fits parallel structure: 'helps me reminisce' or change to gerund 'reminiscing'. Also add preposition 'about' to link 'reminisce' to its object. Suggestion: 'It keeps me relaxed and helps me reminisce about the times when I go to different places.'

× Well, I prefer rural areas because in rural areas there are much more to take a picture.

✓ Well, I prefer rural areas because in rural areas there is much more to take pictures of.

'Much more' is uncountable and not appropriate for plural countable items; the phrase 'there are' conflicts with 'much'. Use 'there is much more' for uncountable or 'there are many more things' for countable. Also the verb phrase should be 'to take pictures of' to be idiomatic. Better: 'there are many more things to take pictures of' or 'there is much more to take pictures of.'

× For example, I can take a picture on a beautiful scene on the mountains, the rivers and on the forest.

✓ For example, I can take pictures of beautiful scenes in the mountains, of the rivers, and in the forest.

Prepositions were used incorrectly: we 'take a picture of' or 'take pictures of' a scene, and locations use 'in' for mountains/forest. Also use plural 'pictures' and 'scenes' to match general statement. Reorder items for parallel structure: 'in the mountains, of the rivers, and in the forest.'

× I also I prefer on the nature side, gives me warm and relaxed.

✓ I also prefer the natural side; it makes me feel warm and relaxed.

Sentence contains extra pronoun 'I' and wrong preposition 'on'. 'The nature side' is unnatural; use 'the natural side' or 'being close to nature.' The clause 'gives me warm and relaxed' lacks a subject and uses adjectives incorrectly; use 'it makes me feel warm and relaxed.' Fix subject and verb agreement and word choice.

× Well, I prefer the views in my country because I really love my country.

✓ Well, I prefer the views in my country because I really love it.

Repetition of 'my country' is stylistically poor. Replace second occurrence with pronoun 'it' for concision. This is a pronoun usage issue and improves flow.

× Especially the mountain province provides many scenic views especially in the mountains.

✓ The mountain provinces, especially, provide many scenic views in the mountains.

Sentence repeats 'especially' and 'mountain' awkwardly and uses singular 'province' then plural context. Make number consistent: 'mountain provinces' or 'the mountain province provides... in the mountains.' Remove duplicate 'especially' and place it appropriately. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× The rivers also are very nice.

✓ The rivers are also very nice.

While the original words are understandable, the natural word order places the subject before the verb: 'The rivers are also very nice.' This ensures correct subject-verb order and smooth phrasing.