Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid incorrect words (e.g. “grocery” is wrong here), and give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I like capturing landscapes and cityscapes because they show interesting colors and shapes. Also, these photos help me remember places I have visited.

Sugestão: Use correct vocabulary and answer directly. Say whether you prefer urban or rural views, then give one clear reason and a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid unclear words like “wheels.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas. Urban scenes often have striking architecture and lively streets, so I find them more interesting to photograph.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer (own country or abroad), then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words (however, because) and correct verbs (visit, explore, admire). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos both at home and abroad, but if I must choose, I enjoy photographing abroad because there are many famous buildings and different styles. At the same time, I like photographing my own country because I know the best spots and local light conditions.

× Yeah, I'd like to take in pictures of different views because I can get a lot of grocery photos.

✓ Yeah, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I can get a lot of great photos.

The original sentence uses 'take in pictures' which is incorrect because the correct verb phrase is 'take pictures' (verb + direct object). 'Take in' means to absorb or attend, not to photograph. Also 'grocery photos' is an incorrect word choice here; likely intended was 'great photos' or 'good photos.' Suggestion: use 'take pictures' and choose an adjective that fits meaning (for example, 'great' or 'good'). Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× I like to prefer wheels in city areas.

✓ I prefer views in city areas.

'I like to prefer' is redundant and ungrammatical: either 'I like' or 'I prefer' should be used. 'Wheels' is an incorrect word choice for 'views' or 'places'; context shows the question asked about views, so use 'views.' Suggestion: use a single verb of preference ('prefer') and the correct noun 'views.' Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× I'll also go abroad to visit it and uh, I like to grow in my country.

✓ I will also go abroad to visit other countries, and I like to travel in my country.

The clause 'go abroad to visit it' misuses the pronoun 'it'—there is no singular neuter referent; use 'other countries' to match the question. 'I like to grow in my country' is incorrect: 'grow' refers to biological or personal development, not travel. The intended verb is likely 'travel.' Suggestion: replace 'it' with 'other countries' and 'grow' with 'travel' to convey the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× Also, I like to interview other countries because there are many famous buildings.

✓ Also, I like to visit other countries because there are many famous buildings.

'Interview other countries' is incorrect because 'interview' means to question people; countries cannot be interviewed. The correct verb for going to places is 'visit.' Suggestion: use 'visit other countries' to express traveling to see famous buildings. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).