Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and natural, but watch small grammar errors and redundancy. Use one strong topic sentence, then one or two supporting sentences with linking words. Correct singular/plural and articles (e.g., "taking photos" not "taking photo"). Also avoid repeating the same idea twice—combine similar points to be more concise.

Exemplo: No, I don't. I prefer to live in the moment instead of taking photos, because I enjoy spending time with my loved ones and appreciating the view together. For example, when we go hiking I focus on conversations and memories rather than photographing every scene.

Sugestão: Your response shows personality but contains informal language, repetition and some awkward phrasing. Replace casual expressions (e.g., "'cause") with formal linking words (because, since). Avoid vague phrases like "things like that"—be specific about what you want to capture. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities provide dynamic scenes and many people moving about, which make photos more interesting. For instance, I enjoy capturing street markets and busy intersections, since the variety of activities and architecture tell a story about city life.

Sugestão: Good strong opinion and some specific details, but correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and remove fillers like "uh." Use linking words to organize ideas and avoid repeating the same phrase. Provide one concrete example to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Definitely my own country. Iran offers a wide variety of landscapes across regions, so you can find beaches in the north, deserts in the south, and dramatic mountain ranges in the west. For example, the Caspian Sea coast contrasts sharply with the Dasht-e Kavir desert, giving photographers many different scenes to capture.

× I prefer to live in the moment rather than capturing each scene and views.

✓ I prefer to live in the moment rather than capture each scene and view.

After 'rather than' when contrasting verbs, use the base form 'capture' rather than the -ing form 'capturing' here; also 'view' should be singular to match 'each'. Use 'capture each scene and view' for parallel and correct structure.

× I like to spend time with my loved ones and enjoy the view itself rather than taking photo all the time.

✓ I like to spend time with my loved ones and enjoy the view itself rather than taking photos all the time.

'Photo' as a noun referring to multiple instances requires the plural form 'photos'. Also 'taking photos all the time' is natural; using the plural corrects the article/number error.

× Unlike all the people, I prefer urban areas to take photos of 'cause they offer a huge number of people wandering around and I like the idea of a big city and I would like to capture the hustle and bustle of the city, a lively area and things like that.

✓ Unlike most people, I prefer urban areas to take photos because they have many people wandering around; I like the idea of a big city and would like to capture its hustle and bustle, its liveliness, and similar scenes.

Replace 'all the people' with 'most people' for a natural comparison. Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. 'Offer a huge number of people' is awkward; use 'have many people'. Pronouns and possessives should be clear: 'capture its hustle and bustle' refers to the city. Also improved list structure and word choice for clarity.

× Each part of Iran prefer uh, each part of Iran offer something new, from sea to deserts, mountains and breathtaking views.

✓ Each part of Iran prefers, and each part offers something new, from seas to deserts, mountains, and breathtaking views.

'Each part' is singular, so verbs should be singular: 'prefers' and 'offers'. Also pluralize 'sea' to 'seas' to match variety, add commas for clarity, and remove filler 'uh'.